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sleep then awake

Contributed by JOSEJAD on Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 08:46:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Dreaming i say “Cry Cry cry……
Die die die…..
Goodbye bye bye …..
God please tell me why why why……..
I am ready to fly fly fly………………”

Yesterday today and tomorrow I awake
With an unbearable sensation of sorrow, pain and ache
loads of liquid falling atop my nostrils to fill a lake
yearning to do something which is my existence to take

in a snowstorm I am just merely a spic on a flake
but one that god almighty can make
yet again comes the thought of take
it is because I never get my piece of cake
for me people would not even start to bake

they do this not realizing what is at stake
that one day there will be a wake
one day I will not wake
when this happens will anyone shake
will they even sigh for god sake

today I will drive my car with no brake
that way it will evaporate the flake
it is the request of a kind of cupcake
and I am the only one that knows how to bake

no more sorrow, pain, and ache
no more dreaming of death then awake
But wait did anyone shake
How will I know for god’s sake

I will then just drive with the most sophisticated brake
I will ask for guidance on all my cakes
I will chose carefully on who will bake
Aid and happiness is what I will take .

Falling back to sleep dreaming “

I will not ever cry no cry will not cry
I will not die no die will not die
Suicidal thoughts I now say Goodbye bye bye
Why did I have them in the first place…. why
God please tell me why why why……..
I am ready to spread my wings of happiness no lie
I am ready to fly fly fly”




Copyright © JOSEJAD ... [ 2012-04-30 08:46:43]
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Re: sleep then awake (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 06:23:02 PM AEST
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I like this one, because you can feel the truth of it in the lines. I was depressed before, also. So I find this poem understandable. Remember this, though. You have to cry. It let's all that negativity out of you. Its great that you let your depression write for you, because now you can look ahead with clearer eyes :-)




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