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I Remember
Contributed by
Ravan
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Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I Remember
I remember the first time you held me;
In your arms I felt I'd found my home.
I remember the last time I saw you;
When I learned the meaning of alone.
I remember the aroma of your soft skin;
More arousing to me than any perfume.
I remember perfume on my pillows;
Another stranger in a cheap hotel room.
I remember your very first "I love you";
Diamond words, a promise of forever.
I remember you walking to your car;
The only word I now recall was "never".
I remember being anxious to see you;
Going to bed at eight to rush the morning.
I remember you and miss you each day;
My life, my love, my soul's transforming.
Frank Van Hoose
May 7, 2003
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Ravan
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2003-05-08 04:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:03:05 AM AEST (User
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your poem is so outstandingly beautiful, yet i find this one line,"Another stranger in a cheap hotel room." to take away from it's overall loveliness, i still love it though lol,
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ravan on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:33:22 AM AEST (User
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Thank you for your very nice words. I do appreciate them. The "cheap hotel room" line is a stark contrast between the two extremes of loving a woman and loving nothing. It's just and unfortunate and unattractive truth. Truths are often like that I've found. ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
frank |
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