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Array ( [sid] => 172217 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My weird Neighbor [time] => 2012-04-28 08:26:35 [hometext] => just wrote this one I was bored [bodytext] => As I sit here looking
Through this window in my room
I'd swear I saw someone
Riding a broom
I looked again to see
if I know who they are
well it's only my neighbor
& that's her new car
I yelled out my window
Your new car is hot
She yelled back at me
crawl back under your rock
she zoomed past my window
with a fluttering grasp
she was looking back at me
as she was running out of gas
I looked up & said for goodness sakes
as I heard her yelling
where are the brakes
They come special order on the model you've got
you've got to stop like the Flintstones
so enjoy the breeze untill the time you get stopped
You should have picked a better model
one more updated to time
but to see you from here
that one suits you just fine
she bounced through the pasture
finally stopping in a ditch
I said now that was classy
you crazy little witch
the hot shot poet [comments] => 1 [counter] => 715 [topic] => 25 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => Corrected spelling per request ~ Moderator_18 Apr 28, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

My weird Neighbor

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 08:26:35 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

As I sit here looking
Through this window in my room
I'd swear I saw someone
Riding a broom
I looked again to see
if I know who they are
well it's only my neighbor
& that's her new car
I yelled out my window
Your new car is hot
She yelled back at me
crawl back under your rock
she zoomed past my window
with a fluttering grasp
she was looking back at me
as she was running out of gas
I looked up & said for goodness sakes
as I heard her yelling
where are the brakes
They come special order on the model you've got
you've got to stop like the Flintstones
so enjoy the breeze untill the time you get stopped
You should have picked a better model
one more updated to time
but to see you from here
that one suits you just fine
she bounced through the pasture
finally stopping in a ditch
I said now that was classy
you crazy little witch
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-04-28 08:26:35]
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Re: My weird Neighbor (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 03:39:26 PM AEST
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lol. entertaining. You wrote it because you were bored... I'm here reading poems because I'm bored. Now your poem has served us both well. Cudo's. Nice work ,truly , Doug

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