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Array ( [sid] => 172214 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Only So Much You Can Take [time] => 2012-04-27 23:16:56 [hometext] => Please comment and leave feedback, so I can make my poetry better. [bodytext] => Do you sometimes feel small?
Always struggling to find a place to crawl?
Always getting beat around and yelled at by people.
All these people were never nice, they were only evil.
As they yell at you, your red blood boils inside you.
There's only so much of it that you can chew.
Instead of doing something, you do nothing.
All you do is let them keep on bashing.
You decide to take your anger out on them by rising against them.
You decide to create havoc, causing a load of mayhem.
As you calm down, the temperature inside you drops.
You just want to be alone, sitting out on the rooftop.
You have no comment and no reaction.
After thinking of what you just did, you have this feeling of satisfaction.
You feel no remorse, no feeling of being wrong.
In fact, you feel what you just did was really strong.
All that anger inside you has always been reserved.
Now that it's gone, you look back at your enemy and say, "You got what you deserved." [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 6 [informant] => AznDemon300 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Only So Much You Can Take

Contributed by AznDemon300 on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 11:16:56 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Do you sometimes feel small?
Always struggling to find a place to crawl?
Always getting beat around and yelled at by people.
All these people were never nice, they were only evil.
As they yell at you, your red blood boils inside you.
There's only so much of it that you can chew.
Instead of doing something, you do nothing.
All you do is let them keep on bashing.
You decide to take your anger out on them by rising against them.
You decide to create havoc, causing a load of mayhem.
As you calm down, the temperature inside you drops.
You just want to be alone, sitting out on the rooftop.
You have no comment and no reaction.
After thinking of what you just did, you have this feeling of satisfaction.
You feel no remorse, no feeling of being wrong.
In fact, you feel what you just did was really strong.
All that anger inside you has always been reserved.
Now that it's gone, you look back at your enemy and say, "You got what you deserved."

Copyright © AznDemon300 ... [ 2012-04-27 23:16:56]
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Re: Only So Much You Can Take (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 04:36:40 PM AEST
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The rage just burst out of this. The emotion is like a volcano. It is verry good, and just remember that sometimes it is good to let anger out, otherwise, as you said here, you become like someone else.

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