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Array ( [sid] => 172205 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart's Revenge [time] => 2012-04-27 13:50:29 [hometext] => more of my older ones [bodytext] => She has a way to make you feel
Like you're one of a kind
She doesn't know you realize
you're the last thing on her mind
She doesn't know you're on to
The little games she plays
She cannot see she disgusts you
The longer that she stays
This I tip my hat to
you found the one thing I despise
it's a woman that's so filthy
with little bitty lies
This time I will not kiss you
I believe you know what you are
so do all who knows you
be they near or far
bad news travels fast
faster than you can see
I must walk away from you right now
I've become your tragedy
The hot shot poet

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 112 [topic] => 24 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => Corrected spelling per request in PM ~ Moderator_18 Apr 28, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Heart's Revenge

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 01:50:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



She has a way to make you feel
Like you're one of a kind
She doesn't know you realize
you're the last thing on her mind
She doesn't know you're on to
The little games she plays
She cannot see she disgusts you
The longer that she stays
This I tip my hat to
you found the one thing I despise
it's a woman that's so filthy
with little bitty lies
This time I will not kiss you
I believe you know what you are
so do all who knows you
be they near or far
bad news travels fast
faster than you can see
I must walk away from you right now
I've become your tragedy
The hot shot poet





Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-04-27 13:50:29]
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Re: Heart's Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 05:33:17 AM AEST
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Another great piece!!
I'm becoming a fan!!
Keep writing&Posting!!
Always,
Brutal soul




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