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haiku on heartbreak
Contributed by
michaelanncharly
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Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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he walked out the door,
out of my life, & my heart
fell into my shoes.
Copyright ©
michaelanncharly
... [
2003-05-08 03:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: haiku on heartbreak
(User Rating: 1 ) by TropicaDextrose on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 05:54:00 AM AEST (User
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profound, as it should
vainly, it nags nosiness
delicate and loud
as a haiku should, touches
deep and true and deep, the touch |
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Re: haiku on heartbreak
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:39:22 PM AEST (User
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I liked this, Im not very good at writing these,lol .You did a good job
Michelle |
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