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A cheap room deep in the heart of Dallas on the corner of third and vine
A blinking intruder without malice Big Jim’s liquors neon sign

There he lies in drunken slumber daddy’s bought him forty winks
Mumbling curses, threatening movements, punching pillows as he sleeps

Near his bed there is a bottle Big Jim’s light makes it glow
Cigarettes, a Zippo lighter and an ashtray overflows

A pretty girl’s picture from his wallet lies crumpled on the floor
A Dear John letter lies beside it that’s been crumpled even more

She played a game to test his love, what was she thinking of
You don’t do that to a big farm boy drinking heavy and in love

Later she came with heavy heart, to tell him she loved him so
In his dream with no time to scream he strangled Mary Alice Lowe

It’s a sad scene that we’re viewing, a boy that gave his heart away
A pretty young girl pale and lifeless in the dark as cold as clay

A cheap room deep in the heart of Dallas on the corner of third and vine
Through the window he went running and died in the glow of a neon sign

The moral is you don’t play games with the one you love
Things change with the flip of a coin to a side you’ll never dream of


Poem by R. E. Poore
4-26-2012








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Deep in Dallas

Contributed by bobbyclay56 on Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 08:59:04 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Deep in Dallas



A cheap room deep in the heart of Dallas on the corner of third and vine
A blinking intruder without malice Big Jim’s liquors neon sign

There he lies in drunken slumber daddy’s bought him forty winks
Mumbling curses, threatening movements, punching pillows as he sleeps

Near his bed there is a bottle Big Jim’s light makes it glow
Cigarettes, a Zippo lighter and an ashtray overflows

A pretty girl’s picture from his wallet lies crumpled on the floor
A Dear John letter lies beside it that’s been crumpled even more

She played a game to test his love, what was she thinking of
You don’t do that to a big farm boy drinking heavy and in love

Later she came with heavy heart, to tell him she loved him so
In his dream with no time to scream he strangled Mary Alice Lowe

It’s a sad scene that we’re viewing, a boy that gave his heart away
A pretty young girl pale and lifeless in the dark as cold as clay

A cheap room deep in the heart of Dallas on the corner of third and vine
Through the window he went running and died in the glow of a neon sign

The moral is you don’t play games with the one you love
Things change with the flip of a coin to a side you’ll never dream of


Poem by R. E. Poore
4-26-2012












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Re: Deep in Dallas (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 11:54:39 PM AEST
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Sad but well written verse. That little word Love can really put a hurt on people no doubt.

Michelle


Re: Deep in Dallas (User Rating: 1 )
by justem on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 08:56:52 AM AEST
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i loved this. very elisa day. dramatic but sad well written




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