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Unnoticeable to the human eye
Leaping through dreams and tormenting..
Tormenting her in her sleep
Strangling her, no screams are heard.

She runs,
faster
Faster.
FASTER!
There is no escape!

Tossing and turning
Trying to awaken
The earth around her trembles
Knowing she is stuck
No sympathy is given

Hiding as the tears fall down
Shaking, knowing her end is near.
The matter approaches her, Lunging!
A scream. An ear shattering scream.

The silence is beautiful.
Except for the
Drip
Drip
Drip
Hanging in the room
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Drip Drip Drip

Contributed by ShaeBay on Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 02:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Lurking in walls, behind every corner
Unnoticeable to the human eye
Leaping through dreams and tormenting..
Tormenting her in her sleep
Strangling her, no screams are heard.

She runs,
faster
Faster.
FASTER!
There is no escape!

Tossing and turning
Trying to awaken
The earth around her trembles
Knowing she is stuck
No sympathy is given

Hiding as the tears fall down
Shaking, knowing her end is near.
The matter approaches her, Lunging!
A scream. An ear shattering scream.

The silence is beautiful.
Except for the
Drip
Drip
Drip
Hanging in the room




Copyright © ShaeBay ... [ 2012-04-26 14:28:53]
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Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 05:53:02 PM AEST
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Drip Drip Drip, such a peaceful sound.


Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 09:56:41 PM AEST
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Well....how decidedly sinister and disturbing
is this? Wonderfully evoking and provocative.
When you can conjure emotion like this from
thin air with just paper and pen, you have done
well.

Thanks for the chill.

~ Breezy




Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by LilDrifter on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST
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Very intense, a great piece. It had my attention from the start and carried me through to the end !!


Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by justem on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 09:01:13 AM AEST
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haunting. reminds me of a nightmare i had. chilled to the bone. Enjoyed your poem...didnt enjoy my nightmare! thanks


Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 02:12:20 PM AEST
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very awesome write thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet


Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 07:48:23 PM AEST
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The matter approaches her, Lunging! Eek!

This is damn scary! Talk bringing the reader into your very own nightmare! Now that is writing!!!



Re: Drip Drip Drip (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 07:49:23 PM AEST
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*Talk about bringing




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