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[title] => My vision restored
[time] => 2012-04-23 11:44:48
[hometext] => This is my second bit of poetry and I don't think it's as good as the my first but people say it's good.
[bodytext] => My vision restored: The fog, heavy, obscuring my vision, the voices of friends guiding me along the narrow path to insecurity, seeing signs of evil leading me down to the darkness of solitude, I turn back but they whisper sweetly poisoned things in my ear contaminating my senses, bringing me down the path of solitude faster, along the path I found a person like me waiting by solitudes door, she greets me as a friend, inquiring where I am going and why, I tell her and she says it will be alright she is there to help bring truth to light, she spoke the words of truth, my eyes opened, my vision restored, the fog lifted to reveal the voices of friends as the voices of foes leading me to loneliness, with her I made my way from solitude's gate to the company of my friends and happiness.
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My vision restored
Contributed by
Heartofapoet
on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 11:44:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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My vision restored: The fog, heavy, obscuring my vision, the voices of friends guiding me along the narrow path to insecurity, seeing signs of evil leading me down to the darkness of solitude, I turn back but they whisper sweetly poisoned things in my ear contaminating my senses, bringing me down the path of solitude faster, along the path I found a person like me waiting by solitudes door, she greets me as a friend, inquiring where I am going and why, I tell her and she says it will be alright she is there to help bring truth to light, she spoke the words of truth, my eyes opened, my vision restored, the fog lifted to reveal the voices of friends as the voices of foes leading me to loneliness, with her I made my way from solitude's gate to the company of my friends and happiness.
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Re: My vision restored
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by ShaeBay on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 02:38:19 PM AEST
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I really like this poem, the descriptions were very well put. The one thing that got me was the format of the poem. It might be easier to catch a flow if this was changed. All in all this was very wonderful :)
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Re: My vision restored
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by thehotshotpoet on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 08:24:17 PM AEST
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once again good job,someday when your bored & on this sight look up my poem called the heart of a poet see if it might help you although i think your doing great thanks for sharing
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