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for a minute so you can dwell
I start a line,stop for my kids
good cover for the way I spell
but honestly it's true
I try to be a poet
& do what Daddy's do
at 5 a. m. I'm writing
at 6 I wake my kids
by 6:15 I'm hearing grief
for what the other's did
by 6:30 I get to write again
oop's there it goes
once again there at it
one stepped on the other's shoes
I like to call this static
it's how it has to be
so as far I my misspelling
I guess it's apart of me
I think I've earned that right
I think my words will say
while I'm trying to stop a fight
sometimes it has to be that way
to be completely true
it's what makes the difference
on your writing & mine too
so before you critisize the writer
try to keep these things in mind
a writer has another world
mine is at the same time
the hot shot poet
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Mispelling words

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 07:53:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

put yourself im my shoe's
for a minute so you can dwell
I start a line,stop for my kids
good cover for the way I spell
but honestly it's true
I try to be a poet
& do what Daddy's do
at 5 a. m. I'm writing
at 6 I wake my kids
by 6:15 I'm hearing grief
for what the other's did
by 6:30 I get to write again
oop's there it goes
once again there at it
one stepped on the other's shoes
I like to call this static
it's how it has to be
so as far I my misspelling
I guess it's apart of me
I think I've earned that right
I think my words will say
while I'm trying to stop a fight
sometimes it has to be that way
to be completely true
it's what makes the difference
on your writing & mine too
so before you critisize the writer
try to keep these things in mind
a writer has another world
mine is at the same time
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-04-18 07:53:34]
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Re: Mispelling words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 12:40:02 PM AEST
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Understood and cute.

However, not sure all of are criticizing. Some are just trying to be helpful. Even between all the hectic hustle and bustle, you're still a poet trying to convey a message. In that message, for example, he threw the ball or traveled through time. so, in that frame of mind, again for example, in your post prior to this one, this line perhaps should have read "might stay through eternity". Unless of course you really are throwing eternity.

Quality instead of quantity. A suggestion would be to write (or type) the poem into a word processor on the ol' puter, have someone help you proof read it for grammar and spelling, and then copy/paste it onto YPDC.

Or maybe not. Simply a suggestion.

Take care,

Tim

Re: Mispelling words (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 03:15:28 PM AEST
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I never mind misspellings. It's hard to find time to write if you have a busy life, A busy life makes for more to write about I suppose
Great poem I personally like your style of writing spelling and all, keep your writing how you like it because it's your message your sending not ours.

Hope to read more soon
-Voice

Re: Mispelling words (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 12:33:41 AM AEST
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Cute and witty write...... I make alot of mistakes. I think Im losing my mind somedays, I used to be top notch in spelling. We all have those moments of mistakes, type o's and spelling. My deal is grammar mishaps all the time and back to mmmm being brain dead LOL

Michelle

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