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I felt my life had been attacked
with one small wrong move
I fell & broke my back
I had no clue to what had happened
there was no pain just sooth
then suddenly I realized
my legs would'nt move
the Doctors they did surgery
said I'd be a brand new man
fortunetly they were wrong
it's part of why I am who I am
18 months in a wheelchair
they said my chance was very thin
there were some miner errors
you might never walk again
my heart fell to my feet
what had this happened for
I lost my will to live
this life I wanted no more
it took my childrens faith in me
the love they have within
I thank God for their persistance
like you I walk again
my life is mostly normal
I run & play all the time
with my children & their belief in me
my life is back to mine
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lifes wake up call

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 09:22:40 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

way back many years ago
I felt my life had been attacked
with one small wrong move
I fell & broke my back
I had no clue to what had happened
there was no pain just sooth
then suddenly I realized
my legs would'nt move
the Doctors they did surgery
said I'd be a brand new man
fortunetly they were wrong
it's part of why I am who I am
18 months in a wheelchair
they said my chance was very thin
there were some miner errors
you might never walk again
my heart fell to my feet
what had this happened for
I lost my will to live
this life I wanted no more
it took my childrens faith in me
the love they have within
I thank God for their persistance
like you I walk again
my life is mostly normal
I run & play all the time
with my children & their belief in me
my life is back to mine
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-04-09 09:22:40]
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Re: lifes wake up call (User Rating: 1 )
by HIV on Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 01:17:28 PM AEST
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I loved it! emotions always count
your friend~HIV

Re: lifes wake up call (User Rating: 1 )
by Avataar on Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 12:29:36 PM AEST
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Yes children can always bring us out of our darkness because they are pure souls that have not yet been desensitized by constant thinking like adults..be it worry, fear, anxiety

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