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Array ( [sid] => 17182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => no title....yet! [time] => 2003-05-07 13:05:00 [hometext] => it's about this guy i'm head over heels for....it's one of my happier poems......help me come up with a title for it.....it's not really TO him, but hey. [bodytext] => I don't know what to do,
or how to say it.
I don't want it to be through,
but it's looking that way.

He doesn't know that he puts the sun in my sky,
or that his smile is the sun.
He doesn't know that whenever I cry,
I'm crying with him.

I love his hair all flippy-outty
and the way those faces.
I love how he sometimes gets a little too rowdy
and comes up with those silly things he does.

He's going away,
and I hope he'll be happy wherever he goes.
He's leaving someday,
but he'll never leave my heart.
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no title....yet!

Contributed by hoping_to_be_me on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I don't know what to do,
or how to say it.
I don't want it to be through,
but it's looking that way.

He doesn't know that he puts the sun in my sky,
or that his smile is the sun.
He doesn't know that whenever I cry,
I'm crying with him.

I love his hair all flippy-outty
and the way those faces.
I love how he sometimes gets a little too rowdy
and comes up with those silly things he does.

He's going away,
and I hope he'll be happy wherever he goes.
He's leaving someday,
but he'll never leave my heart.

Copyright © hoping_to_be_me ... [ 2003-05-07 13:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: no title....yet! (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 06:14:43 PM AEST
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nice poem, i like this one....as for a title, hmm...."going away" "always in my heart" i dont know...im not much of a title person, but theres a few suggestions...dont know if it help any! well once again, nice write!

Re: no title....yet! (User Rating: 1 )
by gribbs on Monday, 19th November 2007 @ 04:27:32 AM AEST
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hand him this poem...("You'll Never Leave My Heart") and he might understand what he is missing in life...nice write...

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