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Array ( [sid] => 17181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => broken hearted [time] => 2003-05-07 12:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => once again i've been misled
once again my tears were shed
why didn't i know something was wrong
but i guess i'll have to hold my head up and be strong
i guess i'll take the blame
casue after a few weeks hs feelings weren't the same
i knew it was going to hppen again
but why did it have to happen with him?
why couldn't of happened with a different guy,
why was he the one to make me cry?
i don't know how long my pain will last,
i thought he was my future but now he is my past
i hope things go your way
and maybe our paths wil cross another day
i won't forget the times we shared
and don't foget the i will always care
if you ever need a friend i'll be there for you
to talk about all the stuff you've been through
so here it is i say good-bye
but this time i promise i won't cry
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 48 [informant] => DOCTERKRISITN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

broken hearted

Contributed by DOCTERKRISITN on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

once again i've been misled
once again my tears were shed
why didn't i know something was wrong
but i guess i'll have to hold my head up and be strong
i guess i'll take the blame
casue after a few weeks hs feelings weren't the same
i knew it was going to hppen again
but why did it have to happen with him?
why couldn't of happened with a different guy,
why was he the one to make me cry?
i don't know how long my pain will last,
i thought he was my future but now he is my past
i hope things go your way
and maybe our paths wil cross another day
i won't forget the times we shared
and don't foget the i will always care
if you ever need a friend i'll be there for you
to talk about all the stuff you've been through
so here it is i say good-bye
but this time i promise i won't cry

Copyright © DOCTERKRISITN ... [ 2003-05-07 12:35:00]
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Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by kangarose on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
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so sad and so heart wrenching know how you feel as many of us here do hold up your head and be strong...great write

Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:01:35 PM AEST
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hey there very sad poem....although it was good

Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by DOCTERKRISITN on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:47:00 PM AEST
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yeah crap happens
thanks

Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by SomethingClever on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:37:46 AM AEST
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Hey Kristen, Yoseff here... good poem...

Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by DOCTERKRISITN on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:16:34 PM AEST
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thank you very much yoseff it means a lot to me

Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 02:51:24 AM AEST
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hey kristin, very very good poem, very sad though....i know how you feel, i've been there....im just glad i have kenny now, i'll never have to worry about that again, ya know... you'll find someone for yourself one day....until then enjoy being free... good write

Lindsey

Re: broken hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by nite_jade on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:29:29 AM AEST
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hi i know what your feeling as i feel it to

i just lost the man of my life do to a nothere
girl

all out good times that we had are gone
and all i have is me

the world that we live in can be so cold
as its hard to find a good man

as we loose the love our lifes
and the tears begin to rain

all we can turn to is a friend and hope and pray
we will be ok

sorry im in the right mood to write tonight lol
very good poem

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