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broken hearted
Contributed by
DOCTERKRISITN
on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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once again i've been misled
once again my tears were shed
why didn't i know something was wrong
but i guess i'll have to hold my head up and be strong
i guess i'll take the blame
casue after a few weeks hs feelings weren't the same
i knew it was going to hppen again
but why did it have to happen with him?
why couldn't of happened with a different guy,
why was he the one to make me cry?
i don't know how long my pain will last,
i thought he was my future but now he is my past
i hope things go your way
and maybe our paths wil cross another day
i won't forget the times we shared
and don't foget the i will always care
if you ever need a friend i'll be there for you
to talk about all the stuff you've been through
so here it is i say good-bye
but this time i promise i won't cry
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DOCTERKRISITN
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2003-05-07 12:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by kangarose on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST (User
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so sad and so heart wrenching know how you feel as many of us here do hold up your head and be strong...great write |
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Apartment213 on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:01:35 PM AEST (User
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hey there very sad poem....although it was good |
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by DOCTERKRISITN on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:47:00 PM AEST (User
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yeah crap happens
thanks |
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by SomethingClever on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:37:46 AM AEST (User
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Hey Kristen, Yoseff here... good poem... |
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by DOCTERKRISITN on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:16:34 PM AEST (User
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thank you very much yoseff it means a lot to me |
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 02:51:24 AM AEST (User
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hey kristin, very very good poem, very sad though....i know how you feel, i've been there....im just glad i have kenny now, i'll never have to worry about that again, ya know... you'll find someone for yourself one day....until then enjoy being free... good write
Lindsey |
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Re: broken hearted
(User Rating: 1 ) by nite_jade on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:29:29 AM AEST (User
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hi i know what your feeling as i feel it to
i just lost the man of my life do to a nothere
girl
all out good times that we had are gone
and all i have is me
the world that we live in can be so cold
as its hard to find a good man
as we loose the love our lifes
and the tears begin to rain
all we can turn to is a friend and hope and pray
we will be ok
sorry im in the right mood to write tonight lol
very good poem |
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