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Array ( [sid] => 171805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => moderation [time] => 2012-04-08 09:33:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => in total moderation
as words race threw my head
they always seem to find a way
to bring me from my bed
I don't mean while I'm sleeping
I mean before daylight
I pour a cup of coffee
& then sit down to write
words in moderation
of everything I feel
my words are never almost right
there excactly what is real
the words they seem to flow
like the breaking of a dam
they may say nothing to someone else
but there excactly who I am
as far as my spelling
this early in the day
I know there's some not written right
but what more can I say
if I were perfect i would be god
perfect for the world to see
he's the only perfect thing in this world
so it surely can't be me
the hot shot poet [comments] => 2 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 51 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )

moderation

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 09:33:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Event

in total moderation
as words race threw my head
they always seem to find a way
to bring me from my bed
I don't mean while I'm sleeping
I mean before daylight
I pour a cup of coffee
& then sit down to write
words in moderation
of everything I feel
my words are never almost right
there excactly what is real
the words they seem to flow
like the breaking of a dam
they may say nothing to someone else
but there excactly who I am
as far as my spelling
this early in the day
I know there's some not written right
but what more can I say
if I were perfect i would be god
perfect for the world to see
he's the only perfect thing in this world
so it surely can't be me
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-04-08 09:33:41]
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Re: moderation (User Rating: 1 )
by Byrdie on Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 01:58:20 PM AEST
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hotshotpoet.........interesting nick name.........
Line 2........through
line 12.....they're
line 16.....that's
always capitalize a person's name...........
especially God.............
I suggest punctuation..........then you will
not make the above errors...
thanks for the read.........

Re: moderation (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 03:01:08 PM AEST
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No one is perfect I doubt even god would be. IT is my belief that perfect or not a person is as they are with or without fault. and they should do things their way. I don't think proper english should be a concern with poetry it should be written as you see fit.

Very interesting read
hope to read more soon
-Voice

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