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Array ( [sid] => 17178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => good-bye [time] => 2003-05-07 11:05:00 [hometext] => this i just about another guy in my life that i cared for. [bodytext] => a piece of me is movin away,
a familiar face i won't get to see everyday.
once he's gne i know i'll fall apart,
all because i care about him with all my heart
those words will stay in my mind,
those words tha made me cry
i couldn't say it months ago
and you never let your feelings show
i should've sadi how i feel
usuallyit's no big deal.
i was tired of being hurt,
mostly i was tired of being treated like dirt
i was wrong
i guess he and i don't blong
but our feelings were th same,
but in the end no one is too blame.
got a job doing itright
it's just oo bad you'll be out of sight.
take cre and be strong
and i hope you're not wrong
i hope thethngs you sad were true,
either way i'lll be here for you
so i'll remember the good times,
give you a hug and say good bye
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 48 [informant] => DOCTERKRISITN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
good-bye

Contributed by DOCTERKRISITN on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



a piece of me is movin away,
a familiar face i won't get to see everyday.
once he's gne i know i'll fall apart,
all because i care about him with all my heart
those words will stay in my mind,
those words tha made me cry
i couldn't say it months ago
and you never let your feelings show
i should've sadi how i feel
usuallyit's no big deal.
i was tired of being hurt,
mostly i was tired of being treated like dirt
i was wrong
i guess he and i don't blong
but our feelings were th same,
but in the end no one is too blame.
got a job doing itright
it's just oo bad you'll be out of sight.
take cre and be strong
and i hope you're not wrong
i hope thethngs you sad were true,
either way i'lll be here for you
so i'll remember the good times,
give you a hug and say good bye




Copyright © DOCTERKRISITN ... [ 2003-05-07 11:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:06:49 PM AEST
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this was very good keep it up


Re: good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by SomethingClever on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 08:16:21 AM AEST
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I get it... hehe


Good work though...


Re: good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 02:47:48 AM AEST
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cool beans kristin, its good...lol i know who this is about :O) too bad he's mine! *wink* *wink* haha im playing

Lindsey




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