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I will love you oh my darling
Till this poet runs out of rhyme.
Till the stars up in the heavens
Have lost their twinkle and shine.

Till you can walk across the oceans,
And Mount Everest has lost it’s peak.
I shall love you oh my darling,
More than a lamb could love her sheep.

And sweeter than any valentine
Sent with chocolate and much love.
Till all rose petals have lost perfume
And angels call from above.

Longer than all Earth’s chronometers
After loosing all ticks and chimes.
Then on into eternity,
I’ll love you just because you’re mine!
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HOW LONG?

Contributed by robert_edgar_burns on Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 01:09:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

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I will love you oh my darling
Till this poet runs out of rhyme.
Till the stars up in the heavens
Have lost their twinkle and shine.

Till you can walk across the oceans,
And Mount Everest has lost it’s peak.
I shall love you oh my darling,
More than a lamb could love her sheep.

And sweeter than any valentine
Sent with chocolate and much love.
Till all rose petals have lost perfume
And angels call from above.

Longer than all Earth’s chronometers
After loosing all ticks and chimes.
Then on into eternity,
I’ll love you just because you’re mine!

Copyright Â© robert_edgar_burns ... [ 2012-04-05 01:09:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: HOW LONG? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 02:34:32 AM AEST
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Okay you two, get a room!!!

I like it and look forward to part two.

Thanks,

Tim

Re: HOW LONG? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 04:17:31 PM AEST
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Tim we don't need a room we just need our minds. smiles.
Awesome write rob. I'm about to post mine.
Smiles, huggs,
#1fan

Re: HOW LONG? (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 06:54:54 PM AEST
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mr. burns that is beautiful keep up the great work
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet

Re: HOW LONG? (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 01:27:17 PM AEST
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Perhaps I'm wrong , I've not seen the movie , but is the picture a reference to said movie From Here to Eternity? I'll have to watch that sometime. Anyways great write. Full of great sentiment and who can resist. Off to read the 2nd now. yours, Doug

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