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Array ( [sid] => 171703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Crazy Little Mind [time] => 2012-04-04 14:28:51 [hometext] => Maybe this isn't normal after all.. [bodytext] => These thoughts are dancing around in my head.
Slowly morphing into a strange little thought.
Oh the thought, screaming its desires!
Wanting to pursue an awful deed!
Oh How its screams! Cursing at me!

It wants to take over my actions.
Take my mind down into the dark.
It's slowly pulling me apart!

You see, these things of which I speak.
They are far from normal. And no one can see.
These little little creatures I see.
They scare me, for no one knows..
The fears they bring, as I lose my head.

Lost from reality, and falling down.
I am drowning as they swarm around me.
Alone in the dark. Not able to see.
They now control me.
Maybe you can see.
These little demons surrounding me.
Whispering their treacherous deeds.
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My Crazy Little Mind

Contributed by ShaeBay on Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 02:28:51 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



These thoughts are dancing around in my head.
Slowly morphing into a strange little thought.
Oh the thought, screaming its desires!
Wanting to pursue an awful deed!
Oh How its screams! Cursing at me!

It wants to take over my actions.
Take my mind down into the dark.
It's slowly pulling me apart!

You see, these things of which I speak.
They are far from normal. And no one can see.
These little little creatures I see.
They scare me, for no one knows..
The fears they bring, as I lose my head.

Lost from reality, and falling down.
I am drowning as they swarm around me.
Alone in the dark. Not able to see.
They now control me.
Maybe you can see.
These little demons surrounding me.
Whispering their treacherous deeds.




Copyright © ShaeBay ... [ 2012-04-04 14:28:51]
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Re: My Crazy Little Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Bookgoddess on Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 05:06:43 PM AEST
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Hon, I see demons all the time. But I don't think I see them in their true form. They are hiding away in good people, making them something they should not allow themselves to become. Stay strong, I did. Now my little demon is cowering in a small corner in my mind.
Here if you are in need,
Gabriel (bookgoddess)


Re: My Crazy Little Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 07:47:42 PM AEST
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the things you speak are not so unnormal we all have our demons that lurk inside of us I myself control mine by writing poetry.thank you for sharing
the hot shot poet


Re: My Crazy Little Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by HIV on Saturday, 7th April 2012 @ 04:35:26 PM AEST
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WAIT!IM NORMAL!..........
really good writing though.




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