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[aid] => mick
[title] => Collide
[time] => 2012-04-03 15:02:16
[hometext] => ....sleepless night and murmuring thoughts ~
[bodytext] => ~ * ~
Life is round-
it revolves
and you have fostered charm
with every circle I spin
My breath, no longer my own,
spills out in heated evolution
Each star falls at your command
spreading diamond dust into my bed
I sleep in the glistenings
of your commission
Dreams hold you through my night
slipping away into the naked morning
(but you remain)
you cling to morning’s thought
and I cannot lose you to the day
(always a memory away)
Your moments shine
and when held in mine,
you collide
stripping me of fear
as I settle in the circles of your world
~ * ~
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[counter] => 404
[topic] => 43
[informant] => Breezy
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Collide
Contributed by
Breezy
on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2012 @ 03:02:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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~ * ~
Life is round-
it revolves
and you have fostered charm
with every circle I spin
My breath, no longer my own,
spills out in heated evolution
Each star falls at your command
spreading diamond dust into my bed
I sleep in the glistenings
of your commission
Dreams hold you through my night
slipping away into the naked morning
(but you remain)
you cling to morning’s thought
and I cannot lose you to the day
(always a memory away)
Your moments shine
and when held in mine,
you collide
stripping me of fear
as I settle in the circles of your world
~ * ~
Copyright ©
Breezy
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2012-04-03 15:02:16]
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Re: Collide
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2012 @ 03:23:25 PM AEST
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Won't pretend to know what this means but I can say what it reminds me of. Sorta reminds me of a dream and reminiscing within our deep thoughts...to ourselves. Memories are cool...at least the ones written about here.
Glad to see you were able to make it here. Yayness fills me. YAY!!!
Me |
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Re: Collide
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by barfly on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2012 @ 05:11:04 PM AEST
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| awesome writing... very distant and insightful |
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Re: Collide
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by dojo1970 on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2012 @ 09:43:54 PM AEST
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| your use of words is very captivating. your poem is well written. I look forward to reading more |
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Re: Collide
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 08:57:18 PM AEST
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Friend, it's real good to see you back posting again.
Welcome home.
Good work.
big smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Collide
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 03:00:36 AM AEST
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It is so nice to see a post from you dear Roxi. This is a delight to read as always:) I hope you are going to keep posting!!???
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Collide
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by doug on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 02:02:22 PM AEST
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| How many nights spent with someone special woven into the tapestry of our thoughts. I've read so many of your comments on my writing and I've neglected you far to long but no more. You're talent is undeniable. Please never stop writing. I'll be watching for more from you. truly yours , Doug |
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Re: Collide
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by elle on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 07:39:41 AM AEST
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Hi Breezy,
What a delightful way to start my morning!!
Your words transcend & float back to rest in the subtlest corners of ones being.
I feel very blessed to have ventured anywhere near your verse & meaning.
The wonder of my day is now complete & it's only 8:45 am.
Thank you so. . .
elle :)
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Re: Collide
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by spud on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 09:43:20 AM AEST
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Hi Breezy,
There are many on this site whose work is
both commendable and commentable - but
only a handful produce compositions that are
beyond the reach of all commendation and
commentary. Glowing superlatives abound,
but none could do this magical emotional
piece of pure poetry any justice.
But let me try ........ Breathless!!
Tommy
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Re: Collide
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 08:24:26 AM AEST
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| enjoying every written word you have painted upon page. The colours in my mind are ignited with each word..dazzling my mind to absolute fulfillment as I read.Excellent write once again.ND |
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Re: Collide
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 3rd November 2013 @ 11:49:51 PM AEST
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This connection you speak of here is a rare, and special find. To lose something so precious can be unbearable in moments, and you voice that feeling very well. Dreams and who/what we experience while deep in slumber can be a magical place that is downright miserable to leave. This write is raw with emotion, and melancholy in all the right ways. I love it.
~Scorp |
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