Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:46:53 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 171612 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Syria's Agony [time] => 2012-03-30 14:55:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>


Thanks brave reporters you that hold for us
The fight for Syrian democracy,
And in great peril roll your cameras
So that the world at large can watch and see
Homs- Syria's dread Zero Ground,
Annihiloation and destruction bound.

The view of horror meets the viewers' eyes
A view that story narrative defies,
A view of suffering,of grief and pain
Does paralize the willing poet's pen.
Horrendous view - So far beyond belief,
Of so much torment sufferig and grief.

This without consolation and support
The world looks on consuming gypsywort.
Shells fly and killer rockets zoom
'Gainst helpless orphans crowded in a room
No food- the government is in control
That has no heart, no conscience and no soul.



New rounds of mortar shells hiss through the night
With Ammunition by Iran supplied.
New rounds of bombs and flying shrapnel bring
Without respite increasing suffering.,
Unfolding horror and new tragedy
Brews behind scenes, but none can run and flee.

Small male-shift sick bay wards are overfilled,
No medicines, the doctors were all killed.
A patient makes faint signals with the eyes,
For help - invain,- than turns around and dies.
The broken shards of erstwhile windows clink.
And bloody rags soak in a kitchen sink.

Two amputated legs in mildew rot
And stink in a deserted city lane.
Its trunk or corpse lies somewhere on a cot
In unattended agonzing pain.
"Homs is the worst" the brave reporters tell
A replica indeed on earth of hell'

Lo! media bards! and poets, you that breath
The air of massacre and slaughtering
Help bring the arch fiend to his knees
And ring the bell, the News Bell ring! ring! ring !
May God Almighty piety Syria,
And many a far-off country's suffering land
That share with Him the pains of Gogatha,
And for their comfort an archangel send.

(C) Elizabeth Dandy




.











.

,

. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 134 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Elizabeth_Dandy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Syria's Agony

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 30th March 2012 @ 02:55:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief





Thanks brave reporters you that hold for us
The fight for Syrian democracy,
And in great peril roll your cameras
So that the world at large can watch and see
Homs- Syria's dread Zero Ground,
Annihiloation and destruction bound.

The view of horror meets the viewers' eyes
A view that story narrative defies,
A view of suffering,of grief and pain
Does paralize the willing poet's pen.
Horrendous view - So far beyond belief,
Of so much torment sufferig and grief.

This without consolation and support
The world looks on consuming gypsywort.
Shells fly and killer rockets zoom
'Gainst helpless orphans crowded in a room
No food- the government is in control
That has no heart, no conscience and no soul.



New rounds of mortar shells hiss through the night
With Ammunition by Iran supplied.
New rounds of bombs and flying shrapnel bring
Without respite increasing suffering.,
Unfolding horror and new tragedy
Brews behind scenes, but none can run and flee.

Small male-shift sick bay wards are overfilled,
No medicines, the doctors were all killed.
A patient makes faint signals with the eyes,
For help - invain,- than turns around and dies.
The broken shards of erstwhile windows clink.
And bloody rags soak in a kitchen sink.

Two amputated legs in mildew rot
And stink in a deserted city lane.
Its trunk or corpse lies somewhere on a cot
In unattended agonzing pain.
"Homs is the worst" the brave reporters tell
A replica indeed on earth of hell'

Lo! media bards! and poets, you that breath
The air of massacre and slaughtering
Help bring the arch fiend to his knees
And ring the bell, the News Bell ring! ring! ring !
May God Almighty piety Syria,
And many a far-off country's suffering land
That share with Him the pains of Gogatha,
And for their comfort an archangel send.

(C) Elizabeth Dandy




.











.

,

.




Copyright © Elizabeth_Dandy ... [ 2012-03-30 14:55:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Syria's Agony (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th March 2012 @ 06:44:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a very touching write and the photos tell it all.
I havn't watched the news in a while.
This is heart wrenching.
I'm at a loss of words.
Thank you so much for this aweesome write.
Huggs, blessings, luv, prayer,
emy


Re: Syria's Agony (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 4th August 2020 @ 03:46:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
So true................... Thank you for this!




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com