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Array ( [sid] => 171581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One last message [time] => 2012-03-28 15:29:28 [hometext] => -A message from my mind, but not acted on- [bodytext] => What's the point in living
When you have nothing to live for.
No hope atall when suicide
Comes knocking at your door.

When there's no more life inside you,
Any happiness resisting.
When realisation dawns
That you are nothing but existing.

Your reflection seems to scare you,
There's no soul left in your eyes.
The face that's staring back at you,
You don't seem to recognise.

When all the tears have fallen,
And there's nothing left inside,
But bittnerness, and anger
Makes you run away and hide.

But suicide, he's calling me.
He says to have no fear.
It's selfish and destructive
But i guess the time is near.

The time, that is, to say goodbye,
All emotions so unsteady.
Don't cry, or pray, or mourne for me,

For i was dead already. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MiniMiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

One last message

Contributed by MiniMiss on Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 03:29:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What's the point in living
When you have nothing to live for.
No hope atall when suicide
Comes knocking at your door.

When there's no more life inside you,
Any happiness resisting.
When realisation dawns
That you are nothing but existing.

Your reflection seems to scare you,
There's no soul left in your eyes.
The face that's staring back at you,
You don't seem to recognise.

When all the tears have fallen,
And there's nothing left inside,
But bittnerness, and anger
Makes you run away and hide.

But suicide, he's calling me.
He says to have no fear.
It's selfish and destructive
But i guess the time is near.

The time, that is, to say goodbye,
All emotions so unsteady.
Don't cry, or pray, or mourne for me,

For i was dead already.

Copyright © MiniMiss ... [ 2012-03-28 15:29:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One last message (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 03:39:27 PM AEST
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Your poem is awesome! Not because your sad, but because you know how to express your feelings and thoughts. Not only do you know how to express them, but you know how to make your words flow.
Please do me a favor! If you are truly feeling this way, please log in and read most of my poems i have written! I think there might be a couple that will inspire you and let you know there is a reason to live and that you can and will find happiness. Please read my poems!!!

Waynster

Re: One last message (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 04:23:30 PM AEST
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i agree with the Waynester.. it is a really good poem.. although be it a bit sad.. and possibly worrisome.. then ending is great.. take care..

Re: One last message (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Thursday, 29th March 2012 @ 05:34:58 PM AEST
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Reminds me of a lot of my poetry, but very different to. Very good read. I find that occupying my time with simple things keeps my mind off things. For me my outlet is school I hope you find something to soothe your mind.

-Voice

Re: One last message (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 31st March 2012 @ 06:16:38 AM AEST
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i wanted to thank you for sharing your poem & to say to you you are not alone ,you do excist even to a perfect stranger like myself.
it's emotions like yours that inspire me to try to make someone smile,never give up sweety.also i ad about to poems a day on here not all happy poems but my poems so hopefully you can find another to make you smile.
the hot shot poet

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