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Array ( [sid] => 17153 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => random thoughts of the past few months [time] => 2003-05-07 00:45:00 [hometext] => this is just how ive been feeling for the past few months [bodytext] => every day the the depression sets in deeper and deeper
ive gotten to where the tears don't even flow im so numb
no one needs me, no on cares
none of my family, anyway
ive always been unhappy, but it's just been lately ive let it get to me
ive got to escape
but i don't want him thinking
that's all i want to do
i need him for my heart to be happy,
for this smile to be real
i wann make him as a happy
as he makes me
i know this doesn't rhyme
but i ve just gotta get this out of my head
im just getting to where i can't take it anymore
my sister doesn't love me
my brother doesn't appresiate me
my dad thinks he's the king of the world
and my mom, who's that?
i just want to be happy
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random thoughts of the past few months

Contributed by zeppchic420 on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

every day the the depression sets in deeper and deeper
ive gotten to where the tears don't even flow im so numb
no one needs me, no on cares
none of my family, anyway
ive always been unhappy, but it's just been lately ive let it get to me
ive got to escape
but i don't want him thinking
that's all i want to do
i need him for my heart to be happy,
for this smile to be real
i wann make him as a happy
as he makes me
i know this doesn't rhyme
but i ve just gotta get this out of my head
im just getting to where i can't take it anymore
my sister doesn't love me
my brother doesn't appresiate me
my dad thinks he's the king of the world
and my mom, who's that?
i just want to be happy

Copyright © zeppchic420 ... [ 2003-05-07 00:45:00]
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Re: random thoughts of the past few months (User Rating: 1 )
by daen14 on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 09:04:59 PM AEST
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Not all poetry has to rhyme. You express yourself well. Things will workout just try to focus on yourself a little more. You are the only one responsible for your happiness. Hope things get better.

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