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ALIENS CLONED ME
Contributed by
hray42
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Monday, 26th March 2012 @ 12:18:38 PM in AEST
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i haven't been feeling myself of late
sometimes i sense an altered state
i don't think it was something i ate
because the way i feel is actually great
i have an idea of what it may be
i have a notion that aliens cloned me
and that's why i've been so damn happy
instead of my old self, just hella grumpy
if i could, i'd like to shake those alien's hands
do they even have hands?
i owe them at least that i understand
funny, i never saw them land
well, i should be getting on with my day
i wonder if they threw the old me away?
i hope that this me gets to be the one to stay
i didn't much like me before the aliens came anyway
really, i need to be going
there's so much to do since my recent cloning
this new life isn't waiting, nor is it slowing
thank you aliens! thank you for showing...
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Re: ALIENS CLONED ME
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 1st June 2012 @ 04:54:29 PM AEST
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| cool and very smart, really neat and concise ,takes you on a journey through the mind of someone trying to make sense of themselves sometimes in irational ways , self acceptance is empowering ,when people dont look within for answers they go crazy looking outside and then aliens seems like a less frightening idea to them, really loved it this very clever |
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