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[sid] => 171350
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => corn on the bop
[time] => 2012-03-16 17:04:40
[hometext] => a bop is similar to a sonnet with a refrain after stanza's of 6, 8 and 6. Does not have to rhyme but should normally stick to iambic pentameter. Stanza's should consist of problem, expansion, solution/collapse
[bodytext] => I'm here, she's there, our paths are lost to fate efforts exhaust, but nothing comes to bear I long for that sweet something on my plate but I have lost the means to catch my share the thrill we felt when we had that first date she knows now, Oz is fake, and she don't care For love is an illusion, hearts are cruel I yearn for her and know my plans are wrong I think each day too much of where she'll be the love she lost stays with me and it's strong but she is like a wall against my plea although I know it's fate and she belongs banging my head encouraged her to flee now I'm alone, I listen to my songs knowing I've lost all and she flies so free For love is an illusion, hearts are cruel Well I can't take this feeling as my own it eats away, leaving me bare and cold perfect love memories are dry as bone no sustenance is gained, I must be bold I swallow at my pride; enter the zone and meet with she whose love is bought and sold For love is an illusion, hearts are cruel [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => poeticjestix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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