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Array ( [sid] => 171286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => emptiness. . . [time] => 2012-03-13 05:23:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I long to fall. . .
to love again. . .

even if it meant
the end of me

I long to hold you. . .
your sea-kissed gaze

salty & stinging,
an iris treasure

near rainbow's end. . .
shades of heaven awaiting me

I long. . . I savor. . .
I beg. . . entreat. . .

& sometimes, solemn
I sit with sunset

cliffs a' looming,
spray rides the breeze

back to the sea
I simply sit

in evenings splendor
& quietly caress your memory

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emptiness. . .

Contributed by elle on Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 05:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I long to fall. . .
to love again. . .

even if it meant
the end of me

I long to hold you. . .
your sea-kissed gaze

salty & stinging,
an iris treasure

near rainbow's end. . .
shades of heaven awaiting me

I long. . . I savor. . .
I beg. . . entreat. . .

& sometimes, solemn
I sit with sunset

cliffs a' looming,
spray rides the breeze

back to the sea
I simply sit

in evenings splendor
& quietly caress your memory

Copyright © elle ... [ 2012-03-13 05:23:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: emptiness. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 07:48:23 AM AEST
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i really like this poem.. the line about the sea-kissed gaze is great.. i don't think i could come up with that in a million years.. take care..

Re: emptiness. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 08:13:55 AM AEST
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Loneliness sucks but "caressing memories" does have a tendency to help. I soooooooooooooooooooo love your poetry and miss it (you) when it is not regularly posted. You are definitely gifted.

cool dude

cool dude

Re: emptiness. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by richard2 on Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 09:25:27 AM AEST
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I too like this poem
the sea as something bigger than our feelings
thus somehow healing for memories and loss.
I can relate

Richard

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