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Array ( [sid] => 171268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind closed eyes [time] => 2012-03-12 10:37:22 [hometext] => Just use of imagination to relieve the soul. [bodytext] => Just close your eyes
A black and silver reflection you will see.
This is the place
Where, my words come to me.

Setting within myself
My body speaks a language I do not know.
My body a motionless vessel
My soul cries with a tone so very low.

Peace and tranquility
A passion my soul cries for
A broken vessel
There must be a way to restore.

Even when my eyes are closed
My soul can see beyond.
Sometimes with the words I find
It’s like waving a magical wand.

Every person is somehow different
But yet we’re all still the same.
The soul that’s in our vessels
Has no one to blame.

Reincarnation
is something in which I believe.
To many others
It’s something they can’t conceive.

So, as I set here
Reflections all around
My eyes are surely closed
I block out every sound.

If I was reincarnated
When, life was given to me.
I seem to have a soul
That wants many things to see.

If you’re feeling sad
wanting to unleash the pains within.
Close your eyes
write down the words you find when you open them again.
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Behind closed eyes

Contributed by waynster on Monday, 12th March 2012 @ 10:37:22 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Just close your eyes
A black and silver reflection you will see.
This is the place
Where, my words come to me.

Setting within myself
My body speaks a language I do not know.
My body a motionless vessel
My soul cries with a tone so very low.

Peace and tranquility
A passion my soul cries for
A broken vessel
There must be a way to restore.

Even when my eyes are closed
My soul can see beyond.
Sometimes with the words I find
It’s like waving a magical wand.

Every person is somehow different
But yet we’re all still the same.
The soul that’s in our vessels
Has no one to blame.

Reincarnation
is something in which I believe.
To many others
It’s something they can’t conceive.

So, as I set here
Reflections all around
My eyes are surely closed
I block out every sound.

If I was reincarnated
When, life was given to me.
I seem to have a soul
That wants many things to see.

If you’re feeling sad
wanting to unleash the pains within.
Close your eyes
write down the words you find when you open them again.




Copyright © waynster ... [ 2012-03-12 10:37:22]
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Re: Behind closed eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Monday, 12th March 2012 @ 01:51:13 PM AEST
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this is very nice!! it's very poetic i have to say.. if that makes sense.. but it is good.. thanks for writing it..


Re: Behind closed eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Bookgoddess on Monday, 12th March 2012 @ 10:53:48 PM AEST
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I really like this. It is kinda helpful.


Re: Behind closed eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 01:24:43 AM AEST
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Don't remember if I've ever commented on any of your writing before or not. I luv your writing and I was just talking about reincarnation yesterday after noon. I know about this write.
Great work.
Blessings,
emy


Re: Behind closed eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 06:09:45 AM AEST
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this is good, I like the rythm in it, if you get me right... and the words too of course


Re: Behind closed eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 06:55:46 AM AEST
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I feel like poetry is the greatest deep emotional connection that a person can achieve through writing. Your poem conveyed this well.




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