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Array ( [sid] => 171175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whats Hiding Underneath [time] => 2012-03-06 15:42:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Shredding MY skin
Drinking the blood inside MY lips
Screaming inside MY mind
As the pain intensifies...
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What always makes me so mad!
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What I Hide In The Past!
HIDING UNDERNEATH MY SKIN!!
feeling it's needles stab MY brain
The internal sore that connects to MY veins
So scared it might creep out from under MY skin
Releasing the demons with in
Looking for all MY lies
And looking into MY eyes
As the hatred begins to take over MY life...
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What always makes me so sad!
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What I Hide In The Past!
HIDING UNDERNEATH MY SKIN!!
what I hide beneath my skin
so emotional where do I begin
The anger I can taste,The hatred I can't replace
find it some where inside
find all my lies
Hiding underneath my skin,holding all your sins
Suffering from my internal Cyst. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 125 [topic] => 71 [informant] => HIV [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

Whats Hiding Underneath

Contributed by HIV on Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 03:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Shredding MY skin
Drinking the blood inside MY lips
Screaming inside MY mind
As the pain intensifies...
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What always makes me so mad!
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What I Hide In The Past!
HIDING UNDERNEATH MY SKIN!!
feeling it's needles stab MY brain
The internal sore that connects to MY veins
So scared it might creep out from under MY skin
Releasing the demons with in
Looking for all MY lies
And looking into MY eyes
As the hatred begins to take over MY life...
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What always makes me so sad!
I can tell many of you want to ask!
What I Hide In The Past!
HIDING UNDERNEATH MY SKIN!!
what I hide beneath my skin
so emotional where do I begin
The anger I can taste,The hatred I can't replace
find it some where inside
find all my lies
Hiding underneath my skin,holding all your sins
Suffering from my internal Cyst.

Copyright © HIV ... [ 2012-03-06 15:42:55]
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Re: Whats Hiding Underneath (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 10:39:54 PM AEST
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Very gripping, as well as macabre...Nice or maybe not so nice imagery.. Hoping this is nothing of personal experience.. Peace & blessings be with you if that is the case..

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