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blood
Contributed by
dark_angel_babay
on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Blood runs from my wrists,
And the blood runs from my lips,
My eyes begin to cry blood,
And all thats left is death,
My grave is getting deeper,
And they're chisiling my name on a tomb stone,
What little life I had left is gone, gone, gone,
I slowly lose my mind,
And my hands begin to shake,
I take a final breath,
And the light inside is gone,
A candle is lit,
Please rest my soul.
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2003-05-06 10:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 04:23:46 PM AEST (User
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A short but v. good, chilling write.
i love the link of light between the two lines:
And the light inside is gone,
A candle is lit
hugs :-)
x_x_x
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Re: blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by M on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 01:30:17 PM AEST (User
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very good... |
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Re: blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by tease_whizz on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 02:55:59 PM AEST (User
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simply written but tragically beautiful. i love the dark imagery and the links between the metaphors. hope to read more of your work soon, Kate x |
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