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Array ( [sid] => 171152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => IN THE GARDEN [time] => 2012-03-05 15:59:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => life seems to be slipping right by
sooner or later everyone must die
so together let's take a chance
to bury the dead and hope for romance
i stepped out into the garden today
i held a flower as it withered away
a group of clouds made an interesting show
there for a moment, but then had to go
an old song was playing in my dizzy head
it's original author i felt must be dead
deeper in thought i slowly went
my life and my money, they were both spent
into the contortions of hell i hastefully crept
as my mother sat by a window and wearily wept
strange feelings inside had quickly grown
my wishes were lost when the candles were blown
i tried to lay down and sleep there 'til night
you thought i was wrong, but i knew i was right... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 73 [informant] => hray42 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

IN THE GARDEN

Contributed by hray42 on Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 03:59:31 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

life seems to be slipping right by
sooner or later everyone must die
so together let's take a chance
to bury the dead and hope for romance
i stepped out into the garden today
i held a flower as it withered away
a group of clouds made an interesting show
there for a moment, but then had to go
an old song was playing in my dizzy head
it's original author i felt must be dead
deeper in thought i slowly went
my life and my money, they were both spent
into the contortions of hell i hastefully crept
as my mother sat by a window and wearily wept
strange feelings inside had quickly grown
my wishes were lost when the candles were blown
i tried to lay down and sleep there 'til night
you thought i was wrong, but i knew i was right...

Copyright © hray42 ... [ 2012-03-05 15:59:31]
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Re: IN THE GARDEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 05:02:23 PM AEST
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The wonders nature can arouse in one! Quite a sad ending from what I read but it is inspiring to know that we must "bury the dead" and look for hope in life. Take care and God bless,
Deidra

Re: IN THE GARDEN (User Rating: 1 )
by shereal_14 on Friday, 16th March 2012 @ 10:26:05 PM AEST
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Love it! You truly have a gift for words...keep 'em coming!

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