Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 12:23:04 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 171127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eaten up Inside [time] => 2012-03-04 13:15:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't know anything
don't know if I'm truly some body
I feel so out of place,nothing seems to be going my way
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!
sometimes I would pray,just to see if anything would happen to me
or is it all just make believe
so many times I've felt blood only it's a dream
I feel so strange as I feel all these feelings flow through me
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!...
Feels like you all are stabbing me!
As you watch me rot away!
You finally beg me to stay!
What do you want from me!
I'm Just A Human Being!! Living Life Full Of Pain And Misery!!
I'm Sick Of Being Every Bodies Whore! I'M SICK OF BEING EVERY BODIES WHORE!!...
for once! I'm Gonna Stand Up! And Please Me!!
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!...
Feels like you all are stabbing me!
As you watch me rot away!
You finally beg me to stay!
But I turn around and say... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 137 [topic] => 48 [informant] => HIV [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Eaten up Inside

Contributed by HIV on Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 01:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I don't know anything
don't know if I'm truly some body
I feel so out of place,nothing seems to be going my way
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!
sometimes I would pray,just to see if anything would happen to me
or is it all just make believe
so many times I've felt blood only it's a dream
I feel so strange as I feel all these feelings flow through me
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!...
Feels like you all are stabbing me!
As you watch me rot away!
You finally beg me to stay!
What do you want from me!
I'm Just A Human Being!! Living Life Full Of Pain And Misery!!
I'm Sick Of Being Every Bodies Whore! I'M SICK OF BEING EVERY BODIES WHORE!!...
for once! I'm Gonna Stand Up! And Please Me!!
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!...
Feels like you all are stabbing me!
As you watch me rot away!
You finally beg me to stay!
But I turn around and say...




Copyright © HIV ... [ 2012-03-04 13:15:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Eaten up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Blankman on Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 01:39:14 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
GREAT poem.


Re: Eaten up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by gailj1432 on Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 04:26:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
wow...very deep


Re: Eaten up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Thursday, 8th March 2012 @ 09:52:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Immense power and anger is overflowing from my screen as I read this.
I have felt many of these things at points in my life and it sucks.
Life has it's moments, hold on to the good. Don't let the pain overpower the existence of the good.
Very powerful write.
Thank you for sharing it,

Brenda


Re: Eaten up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaeBay on Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 01:54:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
The power leaps out of this poem, as stated. I find a lot of relation to myself in this poem. Its very moving and definitely inspiring. GREAT poem!

Shae Marie




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com