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Array ( [sid] => 170947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be my neighbor [time] => 2012-02-22 14:58:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I still remember everything,
remember the way you took me away
how you enslaved me that day,
Then tied me down so I couldn't scream
Then you took a part of me....
You watched me in a strange way,as I looked at you,you said it's okay
told me go ahead and play,I'll be watching you and you'll soon be enslaved....
I remember everything,how you stole my pride and replaced it with shame and lies
now I know nothing but pain and hate,
when you told me to come out and play,as you said it's okay.....
I remember all my pain,it's driving me insane
living every day with the same old thing....
Be my neighbor,Be my neighbor...my neighbor
I Hate You! Can't You Feel The Pain!
I Hate You! You Took A Part Of Me!
You Ripped My Heart Right Out Of Me!
My Childhood Is Gone! because I trusted you! My Childhood Is Gone!
because of you.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 69 [topic] => 48 [informant] => HIV [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Be my neighbor

Contributed by HIV on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 02:58:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I still remember everything,
remember the way you took me away
how you enslaved me that day,
Then tied me down so I couldn't scream
Then you took a part of me....
You watched me in a strange way,as I looked at you,you said it's okay
told me go ahead and play,I'll be watching you and you'll soon be enslaved....
I remember everything,how you stole my pride and replaced it with shame and lies
now I know nothing but pain and hate,
when you told me to come out and play,as you said it's okay.....
I remember all my pain,it's driving me insane
living every day with the same old thing....
Be my neighbor,Be my neighbor...my neighbor
I Hate You! Can't You Feel The Pain!
I Hate You! You Took A Part Of Me!
You Ripped My Heart Right Out Of Me!
My Childhood Is Gone! because I trusted you! My Childhood Is Gone!
because of you....

Copyright © HIV ... [ 2012-02-22 14:58:23]
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Re: Be my neighbor (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 03:37:50 PM AEST
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Very heart wrenching but I know the pain. I'm still healing but there are more than one day that i DON'T REMEMBER. hang IN THERE.
dang MY COMPACTOR HAS IT'S OWN BRAIN.P.M. ME ANY TIME.
hUGGS, BIG BLESSINGS,
emy

Re: Be my neighbor (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 05:08:50 PM AEST
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Have a read of my poem
Out of Tragedy Beauty Does Rise.
God Bless and I feel you on this...

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