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As my head throbs.
Today has been a long nite at work
3rd shift for 10 hours has ticked away
Where the routine has become rather boring i must say!
I wonder how long until i sleep...
Will today be like yesterday?
I wish i could always play.
But soon enuf that day
Will come because im 23
And i ve had an epiphany
today ...
That my dreams love me
And are waiting on me to lead the way
To a journey far away from the normal day
And be use inspiration as my power
To fuel my days to this success that i seek
Still only 23..but i live each day like its my last
Even tho i tend to carry the past i still cast
Out into the sea of lost dreams and hope...
That im just not another foe on the hope train
And that these dreams i seek are really awaiting my rest...
THIS IS NOT A TEST:+). J NIZ
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THIS IS NOT A TEST

Contributed by J-Niz on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 05:21:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I can feel my heart beat thru my pillow
As my head throbs.
Today has been a long nite at work
3rd shift for 10 hours has ticked away
Where the routine has become rather boring i must say!
I wonder how long until i sleep...
Will today be like yesterday?
I wish i could always play.
But soon enuf that day
Will come because im 23
And i ve had an epiphany
today ...
That my dreams love me
And are waiting on me to lead the way
To a journey far away from the normal day
And be use inspiration as my power
To fuel my days to this success that i seek
Still only 23..but i live each day like its my last
Even tho i tend to carry the past i still cast
Out into the sea of lost dreams and hope...
That im just not another foe on the hope train
And that these dreams i seek are really awaiting my rest...
THIS IS NOT A TEST:+). J NIZ

Copyright © J-Niz ... [ 2012-02-22 05:21:26]
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Re: THIS IS NOT A TEST (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 07:29:45 AM AEST
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SPELL CHECK GRAMMA CHECK FIRST BEFORE POST NOT BAD IF I COULD READ IT LOL

Re: THIS IS NOT A TEST (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 10:37:46 AM AEST
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Well I thinks it's delightful. ummmmmmm. It must be a girl thang. Shame on the band-go,.
smiles, big blessings,
emy
Hey welcome to YPDC

Re: THIS IS NOT A TEST (User Rating: 1 )
by J-Niz on Thursday, 23rd February 2012 @ 03:23:00 AM AEST
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Thanks for comments..I will check grammar before I submit next time. I do understand. I was just very tired from working overnight and typed myself to bed. Thanks again

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