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But To Say That I Love You
Contributed by
kal-el
on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 10:16:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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got nthng else for u bt to say that I Love You...
u may be blind to it, u may choose to ignore or u may not want to...
u may not wish it to be...u may be clear abt things or u may be clouded..
i have nthng else to say..bt to say that i love you...
i wish that i could be the way u wd have liked..bt dn dat wouldn't be me...
den ds mch love wdnt have been there dt i carry...i wd wnt to be better dn i am...i try, nd will try for u always...
i'll do the best i can... and i knw dt i wll be the best... coz the way i love u, none can..
i dnt knw if u cn really see wts happening arnd u...only wish dt u do...
i knw u hv many wishes...wd hv liked to fulfil as many... dnt knw wt to say...
u mke me angry, u mke me happy... u mke me feel good, mke me feel bad... mke me feel strong, as well weak..
mke me feel ignored mke me feel cared...i get so jmbld up nd gt so clear...u mke me go thrru hell, nd meke me feel in heaven...
i hv given all dt i hd...is it dat diff to see...why u still wnt to be smwhere else...
and if it is wt u desire still deep within, thn let it be...tell me nd i shll walk away..
i care for u..and i get upset, angry...its diff to fight all corners...bt im fighting...thnkng abt u, missing u wd every beat...
wish u cud knw..wsh u cd think frm ur heart nt mind...bt i'm strong and bt m losing my sanity...
tell me it is not in vain...
make me believe if u can... i wnt it...dnt knw wt to tell u, nd hw...u gtta do wt u gtta do...
got nthng else to say bt I love you....
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2012-02-20 10:16:03]
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Re: But To Say That I Love You
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by DrogedaRain on
Tuesday, 21st February 2012 @ 10:01:56 AM AEST
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| This would be much nicer to read and enjoy if you used proper grammer. The slang takes away from the flow of the piece. You have talent just take more thought and use proper grammer. Write On ... |
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