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so I'll lay back and fade away
Let me go I'll be fine! So much for being alive! Feels like everyones beating me up inside!
It's my time! Let me die go away! It's everyone I'm hating! Why is everyone waiting!
Whats on my mind! Who can say! It's my infection I'm feeding! I can not stop all this bleeding!
it's my time....
you'll die trying,trying to make me laugh whats the point, I'm not a fake
this pain just won't fade away,all I'm trying to say,I think I'm dieing inside, it's my time....
Let me go I'll be fine! So much for being alive! Feels like everyones stabbing my spine!
It's my time! Let me die go away! It's everyone I'm hating! Why is everyone waiting!
Whats on my mind! Who can say! It's my infection I'm feeding! I can not stop all this bleeding!
it's my time....
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It's My Time

Contributed by HIV on Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 11:32:41 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I try smiling,but inside im so determined to lay back and die it's my time.....
so I'll lay back and fade away
Let me go I'll be fine! So much for being alive! Feels like everyones beating me up inside!
It's my time! Let me die go away! It's everyone I'm hating! Why is everyone waiting!
Whats on my mind! Who can say! It's my infection I'm feeding! I can not stop all this bleeding!
it's my time....
you'll die trying,trying to make me laugh whats the point, I'm not a fake
this pain just won't fade away,all I'm trying to say,I think I'm dieing inside, it's my time....
Let me go I'll be fine! So much for being alive! Feels like everyones stabbing my spine!
It's my time! Let me die go away! It's everyone I'm hating! Why is everyone waiting!
Whats on my mind! Who can say! It's my infection I'm feeding! I can not stop all this bleeding!
it's my time....
my time!!

Copyright © HIV ... [ 2012-02-17 11:32:41]
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Re: It's My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 03:02:10 PM AEST
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i actually really liked this. when i first clicked on it, i thought it was gonna be something completely different. i'm so glad it was different. i loved it. so full of emotion, and anger and i got the sense of acceptance too..like, hey, just leave me alone to do whatever it is i'm going to do, even if i choose death, who are you to judge my decision. good job on this. keep writing.

Re: It's My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 06:06:32 PM AEST
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Great writing.
It's very touching.
Hang tuff.
Blessings,
emy

Re: It's My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Ellewood on Saturday, 18th February 2012 @ 06:34:32 AM AEST
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I could feel your emotions so strongly when i read this writing piece--I am sorry you are in so much pain. I hope those that surround you give you the peace that you need so much...

Re: It's My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on Saturday, 18th February 2012 @ 10:51:48 PM AEST
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I say you aren't the only one who feels that way. I mean out of the 6 billion people, there has to be more. I mean if it was just you, you're looking at a 1.6666666666666666666666666666667e-8% out of 100% ratio. I have felt this way before too, and whether or not you're young, life isn't as bad as you think it is. It's just that the world isn't fair. I hope you overcome your struggles for suicide is never an answer.

- Johnny

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