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Array ( [sid] => 170816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => water [time] => 2012-02-14 05:45:54 [hometext] => (about water. If it had the power to speak ,and react againest the ill treatments againest nature and it self) [bodytext] => I was here
before,the earth
first became pregnant

under the molten rocks
between the crudes and coal
longing to spill
spill to colour,spill to light

I streamed,rivered and oceaned
through mountains,plains and pastures
i spread life

they were the first
to embrace me,the fishes
I breeded their love
in my depths

they were the last
to Invade Me,the two leged
creatures,human beings

they worshipped me
I kept them clean

they took me,to
tea cups to closets
from gold mines to muncipalities
they made me dirty
they made me filthy

I made them cry

I flooded and tusnamied
distroyed towns and citys
Killed,killed and killed

they rejuvanated and reproduced
Again,Again and Again

I long to fly away
from colours,from light
to darkness,to vaccum
between meators and comets
to the very end of the universe

Not to come back
to this earth
As Rain,As River
As Sowing,As Reaping
AS LIFE
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 124 [topic] => 27 [informant] => benjamin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
water

Contributed by benjamin on Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 05:45:54 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



I was here
before,the earth
first became pregnant

under the molten rocks
between the crudes and coal
longing to spill
spill to colour,spill to light

I streamed,rivered and oceaned
through mountains,plains and pastures
i spread life

they were the first
to embrace me,the fishes
I breeded their love
in my depths

they were the last
to Invade Me,the two leged
creatures,human beings

they worshipped me
I kept them clean

they took me,to
tea cups to closets
from gold mines to muncipalities
they made me dirty
they made me filthy

I made them cry

I flooded and tusnamied
distroyed towns and citys
Killed,killed and killed

they rejuvanated and reproduced
Again,Again and Again

I long to fly away
from colours,from light
to darkness,to vaccum
between meators and comets
to the very end of the universe

Not to come back
to this earth
As Rain,As River
As Sowing,As Reaping
AS LIFE




Copyright © benjamin ... [ 2012-02-14 05:45:54]
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Re: water (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 06:52:02 AM AEST
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nice work want more will look out for your posts


Re: water (User Rating: 1 )
by Kailas on Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 03:09:58 PM AEST
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i read your poem too and it's very inspiring!




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