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Array ( [sid] => 170813 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paranoid Insomnia: [time] => 2012-02-13 22:41:43 [hometext] => This was written one night when I was very paranoid of a certain person, it's about sexual/psychological abuse. [bodytext] => I can barely close my eyes,
Without emotional demise.
Up my spine runs a chill,
These thoughts I try to kill.

Seems inevitable to me,
That he will do as he please,
No matter of a consequence,
I drop trembling, to my knees.

We are among a monster,
But barely anyone agrees.
Not a human, an imposter,
Around all happiness flees.

Get me out, feels so wrong here,
It's a monster, plain and clear.
Forget gaol, death penalty deserved,
By it I am massively disturbed.

It's face a grotesque obscenity,
Never felt hate with such intensity.
Tries to ruin the beauty of love,
In his hands lay the dead dove.

I wouldn't care for it's death,
I wouldn't care for it's last breath.
I'm bound my pathetic laws and rights,
Otherwise I'd end it's life.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 60 [informant] => Kira-KILL-xx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Paranoid Insomnia:

Contributed by Kira-KILL-xx on Monday, 13th February 2012 @ 10:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

I can barely close my eyes,
Without emotional demise.
Up my spine runs a chill,
These thoughts I try to kill.

Seems inevitable to me,
That he will do as he please,
No matter of a consequence,
I drop trembling, to my knees.

We are among a monster,
But barely anyone agrees.
Not a human, an imposter,
Around all happiness flees.

Get me out, feels so wrong here,
It's a monster, plain and clear.
Forget gaol, death penalty deserved,
By it I am massively disturbed.

It's face a grotesque obscenity,
Never felt hate with such intensity.
Tries to ruin the beauty of love,
In his hands lay the dead dove.

I wouldn't care for it's death,
I wouldn't care for it's last breath.
I'm bound my pathetic laws and rights,
Otherwise I'd end it's life.

Copyright © Kira-KILL-xx ... [ 2012-02-13 22:41:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Paranoid Insomnia: (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 06:57:05 AM AEST
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deep angry love it

Re: Paranoid Insomnia: (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 01:06:20 PM AEST
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Again, I am so sorry that this ***** happened to you but I am of the opinion that a person like that does deserve death.

Poetry can be therapeutic.

On another note, your writing reminds me a lot of my earlier days of writing. The encouragement of others help to keep me going so...keep up the good work.

Take care and be well,

Tim

Re: Paranoid Insomnia: (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 01:07:54 PM AEST
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P.S. On the mention of reminding me of my earlier writing, I meant style, not subject matter.

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