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Array ( [sid] => 170666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => REMEMBER [time] => 2012-02-06 07:52:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Remember that staying on the computer too much will give you an eyestrain
and it will work your brain a lot.
but no one complains of it.
but humans are like that.
And there was this woman called insane Jane
cause she wouldn't do nothing but stay on the computer.
She would explain that it was her life.
Jane loved to drink champagne
when she was on her computer.
and would gain a lot of weight.
but Jane didn't care
cause she loved it. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 135 [topic] => 43 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Feb 11, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
REMEMBER

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Monday, 6th February 2012 @ 07:52:43 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Remember that staying on the computer too much will give you an eyestrain
and it will work your brain a lot.
but no one complains of it.
but humans are like that.
And there was this woman called insane Jane
cause she wouldn't do nothing but stay on the computer.
She would explain that it was her life.
Jane loved to drink champagne
when she was on her computer.
and would gain a lot of weight.
but Jane didn't care
cause she loved it.




Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2012-02-06 07:52:43]
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Re: REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by Ellewood on Monday, 6th February 2012 @ 02:57:25 PM AEST
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Nice!


Re: REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on Wednesday, 8th February 2012 @ 05:18:20 AM AEST
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Dear respected butterflygirl40,

All modern girls are not healthy
And they suffer from obesity
They wear thick glasses
Always glued to the computer

They never obey anyone
They bother about nothing
They are damn adamant
God alone must save them

Your poem just informs
As nothing can be done
Let Jesus teach them
The art of fine living.

With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman



Re: REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by CARAAAAA on Wednesday, 7th March 2012 @ 12:42:37 AM AEST
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cute




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