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[sid] => 170607
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[aid] => mick
[title] => isolation
[time] => 2012-02-02 13:51:00
[hometext] => please comment on my prose - what do you think? suggestions/insults welcome
[bodytext] => why should a house have windows? solitude everything removed ignore social gatherings they are a nonsense why can't we simply surround ourselves with walls why should i expose myself you do not deserve to look at me and i do not deserve to see you life is an obscenity i am nauseated by others the mere thought of coming into contact with another fills me with disgust why can't we simply surround ourselves with walls lock in encircled surrounded living minimally and if one day your gaze falls on me i'll cover my head and blot out your face i hope one day humanity shall be swept off of the face the the earth why should a house have windows it's a nonsense why can't we simply surround ourselves with walls something solid to lean beside expect nothing from any one live encircled locked in why expose you self you fill me with disgust you do not deserve to rest your eyes on me the flow of life is an obscenity if one day i see you i will cover my head and you should blot out my face i am nauseated by the presence of others solitude i am pure abandon rebellion live minimally encircled surrounded from horrors of the street i stand alone without remorse far from social gatherings [comments] => 2 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 13 [informant] => newzero [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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