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Array ( [sid] => 170580 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mummys broken heart. My tearey blue eyes. [time] => 2012-02-01 04:08:35 [hometext] => Mummy and her broken heart and my crying eyes [bodytext] => This was the last time.
I think I can say im fine.
You walked in her life like nothing on earth.
And now you walked out leaving your trouble and hurt.

I tried to protect and save her.
But you already had her in a cave.

She's my mother.
I love her.
I need her.
She needs to be strong.
For me, her little angel.
And you said i was nothing but wrong.
But all she could was yell and yell.

To protect me.
To keep me from harm.
But you just couldn't be calm.

You walked out on her.
Just like the other two.
And you think she didn't have a clue.

I cried and cried my little blue eyes out.
But she was still sad without a doubt.

I love her.
And if you loved her. As much as you said you did.
Then maybe she wouldn't have had to get rid.
Of all the stress and pain you caused.
Not that it mattered you didn't follow the laws.

Of love.
Of kindness
You played your own game.
Of taking happiness.

So now I lay here. In bed.
Knowing my mother is still in her own head.

What you did to her is inexcusable.
You broke her heart.
And that leaves a mark.

Mummy bear. Please don't let him get to you.
I hate to see you blue.
Although I have no clue.
I always have and always will love. You.

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Mummys broken heart. My tearey blue eyes.

Contributed by Brittaany on Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 04:08:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This was the last time.
I think I can say im fine.
You walked in her life like nothing on earth.
And now you walked out leaving your trouble and hurt.

I tried to protect and save her.
But you already had her in a cave.

She's my mother.
I love her.
I need her.
She needs to be strong.
For me, her little angel.
And you said i was nothing but wrong.
But all she could was yell and yell.

To protect me.
To keep me from harm.
But you just couldn't be calm.

You walked out on her.
Just like the other two.
And you think she didn't have a clue.

I cried and cried my little blue eyes out.
But she was still sad without a doubt.

I love her.
And if you loved her. As much as you said you did.
Then maybe she wouldn't have had to get rid.
Of all the stress and pain you caused.
Not that it mattered you didn't follow the laws.

Of love.
Of kindness
You played your own game.
Of taking happiness.

So now I lay here. In bed.
Knowing my mother is still in her own head.

What you did to her is inexcusable.
You broke her heart.
And that leaves a mark.

Mummy bear. Please don't let him get to you.
I hate to see you blue.
Although I have no clue.
I always have and always will love. You.

Copyright © Brittaany ... [ 2012-02-01 04:08:35]
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Re: Mummys broken heart. My tearey blue eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by touchinsoulz on Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 07:08:50 AM AEST
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vooo!itz really awesome n actually touched my soul.......................

Re: Mummys broken heart. My tearey blue eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 06:03:01 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is a very sad but it's heart felt.
You did an excellent job telling the story.
Awesome work.
Blessings, huggs,
emy

Re: Mummys broken heart. My tearey blue eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by alliestar1522 on Saturday, 4th February 2012 @ 07:17:12 AM AEST
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It was really nice. Good job.

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