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Outside the Internet

Contributed by brandon440 on Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 12:06:46 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

People always like what I write and this they show me...but some of those people don't even deeply know me...some of em know the surface and Facebook statuses.....put your sense of humor together and try to laugh at this....maybe until you get to know who I truly am...from this point forward I wont take advice from you man...weather you like what I say or not is really irrelevant....weather you believe it or not I know that I am intelligent....I keep a close few and the rest I keep away....proven daily when I try to bring em close that's where they should stay...a few selective one have slipped through the crack....hopefully those ones I could return back....they don't deserve my time or the joys of my rhyme...I like the phrase slippery when wet but your just straight slime...the purpose of this is to let it be known...you stay away like little kids and play on playgrounds while I stay grown...

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Re: Outside the Internet (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 09:26:45 AM AEST
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Interesting write on the true sides of facebook, i hope you're message gets through. Thank you for sharing this.

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