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Array ( [sid] => 17053 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Is it safe to Breathe? [time] => 2003-05-05 02:35:00 [hometext] => A poem about the realization of ones faults and the ongoing cycle of ironic torture of the enlightened ones. [bodytext] => The poison runs deep
It permeates my mind
Mistaken direction
Is it safe to breathe?

My mirror is strange now
I hear the shadows conspire
How naively we we plot
The shortest course to the fire.

The whirlwind of time
breathes breath into the beast
It's teeth sharpened with knowing
The stars mock with their truth
as the beast devours itself.

It is calm now, blessed be
The gnashing has ceased for a moment of eternity
The pain has subsided, aahh sleep
Am I awake or still dreaming?

The calm is now revealed
The eye of the storm is upon me
Is it safe to breathe? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wanderingshaman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Is it safe to Breathe?

Contributed by wanderingshaman on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The poison runs deep
It permeates my mind
Mistaken direction
Is it safe to breathe?

My mirror is strange now
I hear the shadows conspire
How naively we we plot
The shortest course to the fire.

The whirlwind of time
breathes breath into the beast
It's teeth sharpened with knowing
The stars mock with their truth
as the beast devours itself.

It is calm now, blessed be
The gnashing has ceased for a moment of eternity
The pain has subsided, aahh sleep
Am I awake or still dreaming?

The calm is now revealed
The eye of the storm is upon me
Is it safe to breathe?

Copyright © wanderingshaman ... [ 2003-05-05 02:35:00]
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Re: Is it safe to Breathe? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:45:33 PM AEST
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i love this poem, i was reading it last night when power went out lol, had to come back and tell you i think this is a great write:)
hugs nessa

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