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of a starless night, covered by the clouds
sheltered from the light.

There you laid silent for ever so long.....

Then I thought I found you, peaking round the bend
gathered up my courage, chased you once again.
Thought I caught hold of you, it was just a dream.

Not what I thought, not what it seemed, gone again,in a misty stream......

I used to see you everywhere, in a cloud filled sky
with the song of the bluejays
in the sunshine rays, tiny raindrops falling down
a butterfly on my flowers
now you seem to be nowhere around.

Oh muse... we need a date........ don't be late

oh muse.......

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Oh Muse

Contributed by shelby on Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 07:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Oh muse you slipped beneath the covers
of a starless night, covered by the clouds
sheltered from the light.

There you laid silent for ever so long.....

Then I thought I found you, peaking round the bend
gathered up my courage, chased you once again.
Thought I caught hold of you, it was just a dream.

Not what I thought, not what it seemed, gone again,in a misty stream......

I used to see you everywhere, in a cloud filled sky
with the song of the bluejays
in the sunshine rays, tiny raindrops falling down
a butterfly on my flowers
now you seem to be nowhere around.

Oh muse... we need a date........ don't be late

oh muse.......

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2012-01-26 19:17:18]
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Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 08:05:47 PM AEST
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Very creative friend.
I think all writers can relate.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles, blessings, luv,
emy

Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadowman on Friday, 27th January 2012 @ 03:20:17 PM AEST
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You've captured the essence of the struggling artist perfectly. Very good write.

Blessings
Shadowman

Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th January 2012 @ 06:12:31 PM AEST
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Okay, so I'm confuzzled. Is this one of them there oxymorons? cause it looks like you still got the muse and always had the muse.

Perfect ! ! !

Tim

Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 01:56:46 PM AEST
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you still have it. I know what you mean though. A muse is something that I have been searching for for a while now. I missed reading your work. hope to see you around.

Rich

Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 21st February 2012 @ 07:00:01 AM AEST
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My friend,
This poem is sweetly done, Style is crisp and the imagery reflects your feelings very well,
and I want to express thanks as my heart is delighted after seeing your comment on my recent poem.
Hugs:-) venkat

Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 05:11:27 PM AEST
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Very clever write full of truth of human
nature and challenges we all face! Great
job of conveying all of this! Blessings, Rob

Re: Oh Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 01:34:59 PM AEST
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this is pretty good.. i like it alot.. your style is so much like mine it's uncanny.. take care..

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