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I think too much
and the screaming
In my head there is screaming
Never a refrain no pause no peace
It is endless and lonesome
In my home in a crowd
or on a plane flying far away
the insides would rot the same
just blank faces and cruel hearts
frozen hand shakes and emptyness
There is nothing so keep it
I ain't asking and couldn't take it
Not mention your stuck
I know that you love this
No truth no points that cut
or pennatrate
No wisdom for souls sake
just buy buy buy and spend spend spend
Well i'm sick with it
the enoughs enoughs
and where is the end
In another world war
no! we have terroism to defend
and we twist those facts into
laws against religion
and my fingers hurt
and my soul is lost
and my dreams ran away
now that hurts the most
There is little left for us
and pray very hard
i mean I meditate
I stare at the stars
Well the results are the same
and all is so broken
The equations mean nothing
they have already sold them [comments] => 2 [counter] => 90 [topic] => 66 [informant] => cr0wb4r777 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Demi-God

Contributed by cr0wb4r777 on Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 09:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

How much do you think
I think too much
and the screaming
In my head there is screaming
Never a refrain no pause no peace
It is endless and lonesome
In my home in a crowd
or on a plane flying far away
the insides would rot the same
just blank faces and cruel hearts
frozen hand shakes and emptyness
There is nothing so keep it
I ain't asking and couldn't take it
Not mention your stuck
I know that you love this
No truth no points that cut
or pennatrate
No wisdom for souls sake
just buy buy buy and spend spend spend
Well i'm sick with it
the enoughs enoughs
and where is the end
In another world war
no! we have terroism to defend
and we twist those facts into
laws against religion
and my fingers hurt
and my soul is lost
and my dreams ran away
now that hurts the most
There is little left for us
and pray very hard
i mean I meditate
I stare at the stars
Well the results are the same
and all is so broken
The equations mean nothing
they have already sold them

Copyright © cr0wb4r777 ... [ 2012-01-25 21:55:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Demi-God (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 03:27:16 AM AEST
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your poem well explains the negatives of life and the present realm. thanks for sharing

Re: Demi-God (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 06:54:25 PM AEST
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Nice perspectives in this write.
At times I try to ignore all the ugly in our world these days, it would drive one insane.

Good write

M

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