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talking all the time I turn around and your busting my spine
Feeling so unjustified! How could I not see all those lies!
As you stab me you leave me to die! You are my undisguised enemy!
how could someone so close to me,turn around and despise me
hanging all the time I turn around and your screwing with my mind
You think you know me! You haven't heard my story!
One day were close! The next your my most hated enemy!!
WAIT! weren't you my friend
WAIT! weren't you my friend
WAIT! weren't you my.....friend
How could you turn your back on me! You were like family! Now your nothing but one of my hated memories! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 13 [informant] => HIV [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Unjustified

Contributed by HIV on Tuesday, 24th January 2012 @ 03:01:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

how could something so close to me,be my most hated enemy
talking all the time I turn around and your busting my spine
Feeling so unjustified! How could I not see all those lies!
As you stab me you leave me to die! You are my undisguised enemy!
how could someone so close to me,turn around and despise me
hanging all the time I turn around and your screwing with my mind
You think you know me! You haven't heard my story!
One day were close! The next your my most hated enemy!!
WAIT! weren't you my friend
WAIT! weren't you my friend
WAIT! weren't you my.....friend
How could you turn your back on me! You were like family! Now your nothing but one of my hated memories!

Copyright © HIV ... [ 2012-01-24 15:01:53]
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Re: Unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 24th January 2012 @ 05:39:36 PM AEST
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So sad but unfortunately it happens more than we can know.
Hope things change for you soon.
Blessings, huggs,
emy
Good writing.

Re: Unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by Nailgrass on Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 02:56:38 PM AEST
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what or who is a friend? we find out the hard way. nice one.

Re: Unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 06:10:44 PM AEST
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i'm so sorry this happened. good write though

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