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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Last rhyme
[time] => 2012-01-23 05:33:03
[hometext] => Please comment and let me know how you liked the poem, criticisms are welcome.
[bodytext] => Hey, you said we will meet later, didn’t you? I know I don’t mean much, but, I hope your word has some value. We were so great together once, I Hope now I am a little more than a nuisance. I am sorry for all the fights we had, I was jealous, I hope you know that you are still my precious. I know I am not in top 7 of your priorities, And I hope you know, by writing this, I don’t mean any malice. I wish I were some more, But doesn’t everyone? I wish you would have those feelings for me again, The ones which you don’t have for just anyone… You are my only fantasy, I wish I were yours, You are my biggest ecstasy, The one who gave me my first ‘cheers’. You were my only friend, I wish you knew. There were many, I kept for the trend, But none of them true… I told you things, Things no one else in the world knew about me. And I had lots and lots of dreams, But none of them as good as ‘we’. I wish it hadn’t ended so soon, I look at our future, all I see is gloom. Did I not ask for forgiveness enough? If that’s the case, I am sorry… Please don’t be so rough Sometimes my behavior is illusory. I know I made some mistakes, for which I must atone, But none of them so grave, for you to leave me alone. Didn’t I tell you? I love you. The kind of love, I only give to a few. The only thing I want from you, is your time, Is that really such a great crime? I would’ve waited for years and years for you, I wish you weren’t my best friend, For then, I needn’t continue But you are, and I can’t live without you, why don’t you apprehend? “If his love is true, and blood is red, I’d even marry hunchback of notre dame” Isn’t that what you said? I know you said it in the heat of the moment, you are not to blame. I was once a merry man, and I fell in the pit of love, I didn’t want to be rescued, coz you were so close, I shooed the ones above, I was so happy; it felt so real, it was like time just froze. And then it happened, so suddenly, out of thin air, I looked around, and searched for you, you were no more there, It’s sad to know, I am alone here now, But don’t worry girl, I’ll manage somehow. It’s sad to know, you’ve fallen again, I wish the pit was mine, You have nothing to lose and everything to gain, I guess it’s just not my time. Please forgive me, I am weak, When you look at me like that, I just cannot speak, Forgive me, I was so impatient, I know it wasn’t pleasant. Forgive me I made you cry, For some reason, I just have to try… Forgive me, I made you worry, Just stop sulking and smile already. I won’t be corny anymore, just one last time, Bear with me for now, this is and will be, my very last rhyme. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Boldpen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
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