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A LITTLE GOES A LONG WAYS.
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 09:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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In a world of sorrow and sadness
We can always get above madness.
Our touches are few and far between
But hon, it's more real than anything I've seen.
A little goes a long ways
To brighten lonely days.
A Little can get us by
All the chaos we survive.
There's no time in our hearts
Only real love, never to depart.
Just a memory will light our soul
Brightening our path as we go.
Nothing else has our magic touch
As we sift through junk and such.
Even if this world we should depart
This love is eternal from it's start.
To my Tarzan
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emystar
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2012-01-17 21:46:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A LITTLE GOES A LONG WAYS.
(User Rating: 1 ) by DukeW on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 08:25:41 AM AEST (User
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Hello there :) Very nice poem, must say its constant optimism is quite refreshing. I especially like the first two lines of the second stanza. |
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Re: A LITTLE GOES A LONG WAYS.
(User Rating: 1 ) by tntdion on
Thursday, 28th June 2012 @ 10:15:06 PM AEST (User
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nice job |
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Re: A LITTLE GOES A LONG WAYS.
(User Rating: 1 ) by theeman on
Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 02:30:34 AM AEST (User
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i am sure tarzan was happy. keep writing |
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Re: A LITTLE GOES A LONG WAYS.
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 10th August 2020 @ 01:39:41 AM AEST (User
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Great flow and write....
It read so easy too. |
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