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Array ( [sid] => 170184 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My suicide , Your suicide [time] => 2012-01-14 17:31:21 [hometext] => I'm a 14 year old poetry writer and this poem is about one of me and my friend who cut but we don't commit suicide we just have thoughts [bodytext] => Pain in my eyes
Cries from my lies
What did i do wrong
Death to my ears
Life near the pier
What did i do wrong

Cuts on my wrist
Demons in the msit
I did wrong? NO!
Gun to my head
Wrist bleeding red I did no wrong

Starving for your blood
We are so rude
What did i do wrong
My screams in the hall
Blood on the wall
I did no harm...to you

Drip Drip Drip
Of my blood as
i rip out my heart

I feel nothing but cold
I'm almost covered in mold
I lost my mind
Burn my skin so much pain
Oh no! its starting to rain
I've lost my mind

Their coming for me
Their here for me
I have no time
Its the end
No time for the mirror to mend
I have no time

My suicide
My outside
I'm dead next its you
Hells flames
Hearts shame
I'm dead now its you

They came for you to
Their here
BOO!
Stop it you say
Rays of sun take you away
It was also a sad May were you lay...now
Your suicide is here [comments] => 0 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 72 [informant] => DeadlyGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
My suicide , Your suicide

Contributed by DeadlyGirl on Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 05:31:21 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



Pain in my eyes
Cries from my lies
What did i do wrong
Death to my ears
Life near the pier
What did i do wrong

Cuts on my wrist
Demons in the msit
I did wrong? NO!
Gun to my head
Wrist bleeding red I did no wrong

Starving for your blood
We are so rude
What did i do wrong
My screams in the hall
Blood on the wall
I did no harm...to you

Drip Drip Drip
Of my blood as
i rip out my heart

I feel nothing but cold
I'm almost covered in mold
I lost my mind
Burn my skin so much pain
Oh no! its starting to rain
I've lost my mind

Their coming for me
Their here for me
I have no time
Its the end
No time for the mirror to mend
I have no time

My suicide
My outside
I'm dead next its you
Hells flames
Hearts shame
I'm dead now its you

They came for you to
Their here
BOO!
Stop it you say
Rays of sun take you away
It was also a sad May were you lay...now
Your suicide is here




Copyright © DeadlyGirl ... [ 2012-01-14 17:31:21]
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