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Of mistakes I’ve made, and lives upset.
The error was mine, to correct I long,
To put right, what once went wrong.

That day was sunny, unseasonably warm,
I had no idea, my life would transform.
Our relationship worked, after a fashion,
The only thing lacking, a spark of passion.

Maybe thats why, when temptation came calling,
Instead of a no, I found myself stalling.
And when I agreed, to betrayal and lust,
I spared not a thought, for your broken trust.

In the end I was caught, the betrayer, betrayed,
You were destroyed, by the cruelty displayed.
Our relationship over, you left the same day,
That beautiful morning, in early May.

If I could go back, to one point in time,
To change one small thing, this would be mine.
I’d change my past, and defy the urge to cheat,
If I had then, maybe now, my life would be complete.
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A Second Chance At A First Mistake

Contributed by angelus8663 on Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 05:21:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Join me on this journey, of deep regret,
Of mistakes I’ve made, and lives upset.
The error was mine, to correct I long,
To put right, what once went wrong.

That day was sunny, unseasonably warm,
I had no idea, my life would transform.
Our relationship worked, after a fashion,
The only thing lacking, a spark of passion.

Maybe thats why, when temptation came calling,
Instead of a no, I found myself stalling.
And when I agreed, to betrayal and lust,
I spared not a thought, for your broken trust.

In the end I was caught, the betrayer, betrayed,
You were destroyed, by the cruelty displayed.
Our relationship over, you left the same day,
That beautiful morning, in early May.

If I could go back, to one point in time,
To change one small thing, this would be mine.
I’d change my past, and defy the urge to cheat,
If I had then, maybe now, my life would be complete.

Copyright Â© angelus8663 ... [ 2012-01-12 17:21:28]
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Re: A Second Chance At A First Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 06:00:08 PM AEST
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Whoa!! I sincerely hope this is fictional. You have described this world wide reality of life so vividly it pulled me in to regret it with you. Thanks for sharing. If indeed it is not fictioanl, good luck!!
Jenni

Re: A Second Chance At A First Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by richard2 on Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 06:16:35 PM AEST
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So many things in the past, so many mistakes. Deep stuff, you express it well.

Re: A Second Chance At A First Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 12:43:40 AM AEST
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Its the love that`s lost not the chance / person Keep loving. Words can pull it back share the below:
Only one life will soon be past
Only what`s done for love will last
I wish you lay on my laps as sweet honey
You are only for me only for me

Re: A Second Chance At A First Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by BritVent on Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 05:28:01 AM AEST
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Great writing, i love your poetry.

Re: A Second Chance At A First Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Boldpen on Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 08:49:17 PM AEST
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i loved this poem :) simple words, good words.

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