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Array ( [sid] => 17012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => 9 Ladies Dancing [time] => 2003-05-04 17:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => escaped on foot
10 miles west

for heavy blue eyeshadow
and sunshine eternal

Queens and fools dance
'til dawn

in ballrooms crying
for Peace of mind

girls, don't give your
chocolate cake away

to any man begging
for crumbs

when those Queens were
dancing, they knew
who they were

stepping on toes of
the XY 'somes

and laughing it up on
Exit 69

low cut shirts, she attracts
their gaze

but don't forget inside
that chest
beats a person's heart

and i was sure all along
i was one of those
9 Ladies Dancing

i was me

he was him

but no man's hand
can change
my mind [comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 19 [informant] => boobies [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

9 Ladies Dancing

Contributed by boobies on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

escaped on foot
10 miles west

for heavy blue eyeshadow
and sunshine eternal

Queens and fools dance
'til dawn

in ballrooms crying
for Peace of mind

girls, don't give your
chocolate cake away

to any man begging
for crumbs

when those Queens were
dancing, they knew
who they were

stepping on toes of
the XY 'somes

and laughing it up on
Exit 69

low cut shirts, she attracts
their gaze

but don't forget inside
that chest
beats a person's heart

and i was sure all along
i was one of those
9 Ladies Dancing

i was me

he was him

but no man's hand
can change
my mind

Copyright © boobies ... [ 2003-05-04 17:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 9 Ladies Dancing (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 11:36:19 PM AEST
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u know i like this poem...pretty darn good

Re: 9 Ladies Dancing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:55:12 AM AEST
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wonderful job on this poem!! I love it!
Michelle

Re: 9 Ladies Dancing (User Rating: 1 )
by kamikazehileray on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 10:01:51 PM AEST
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interesting wording here...enjoyed the read

Tom

Re: 9 Ladies Dancing (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 11:08:26 PM AEST
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wow very very good

Lindsey

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