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You seek out my demons, I won’t let you near.
Something’s are better, if they are left unsaid,
To know too much, could turn love to hate instead.

I’m not proud of the past, I try to bury it inside,
There are things that to no one, I can confide.
Don’t take it wrong, we all have our past,
Mine must stay hidden, if we are to last.

Maybe in the future, if our lives our still entwined,
I will share with you the memories, buried in my mind.
When we are forever, and our love deep and true,
Then I will try and tell you everything, I owe it to you.

I hope you understand, there are things you just can’t know,
Not right now, let’s give our love a chance to grow.
When you are ready, if you can accept the secrets I bequeath,
Then the time will be right, for me to tell you what lies beneath.

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What Lies Beneath

Contributed by angelus8663 on Tuesday, 10th January 2012 @ 11:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

You ask me questions, that I don’t want to hear,
You seek out my demons, I won’t let you near.
Something’s are better, if they are left unsaid,
To know too much, could turn love to hate instead.

I’m not proud of the past, I try to bury it inside,
There are things that to no one, I can confide.
Don’t take it wrong, we all have our past,
Mine must stay hidden, if we are to last.

Maybe in the future, if our lives our still entwined,
I will share with you the memories, buried in my mind.
When we are forever, and our love deep and true,
Then I will try and tell you everything, I owe it to you.

I hope you understand, there are things you just can’t know,
Not right now, let’s give our love a chance to grow.
When you are ready, if you can accept the secrets I bequeath,
Then the time will be right, for me to tell you what lies beneath.

Copyright Â© angelus8663 ... [ 2012-01-10 23:47:18]
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Re: What Lies Beneath (User Rating: 1 )
by Leena on Wednesday, 11th January 2012 @ 10:04:37 AM AEST
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Great Poem....Keep writing!

Re: What Lies Beneath (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 05:33:30 AM AEST
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unfortunately i have found that very few people can love strongly enough to see past a person's faults. That was a gorgeous poem. What lies beneath...Very poetic.

Re: What Lies Beneath (User Rating: 1 )
by LandsleyAlexandre on Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 05:26:01 PM AEST
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I totally agree with the first lines....and great poem :)

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