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MIstakes Made
Contributed by
newplayer96
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Saturday, 7th January 2012 @ 05:27:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Seemed to be a bright day at the start Annoyance filled within my heart Set out on an unimaginable quest Among queer people who I used to detest I was a knight in a shining armor Who made a bizzare blunder Did things which shouldn't have been done Armageddon had just begun Stuck in a boulevrad of broken dreams The situation makes my insides scream No shoulder to rest my head on No lap to cry on My heart is filled with frustration And maybe accumulation of exasperation This is more than I can endure But there is no cure
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Re: MIstakes Made
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lpm on
Saturday, 7th January 2012 @ 07:31:07 AM AEST (User
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Pretty good. you should definitely write more. |
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Re: MIstakes Made
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ellewood on
Saturday, 7th January 2012 @ 07:54:30 AM AEST (User
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it is not a bad poem at all--reading it I could feel your emotions you are trying to express. Looking forward to reading more! |
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Re: MIstakes Made
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Saturday, 7th January 2012 @ 08:43:18 AM AEST (User
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Your words brought to mind many images, urged me to read on. Great write, never stop. Thank you for sharing. |
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