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[sid] => 170012
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[aid] => mick
[title] => MIstakes Made
[time] => 2012-01-07 05:27:38
[hometext] => Hey guys, this is my first submission, and i've written a poem after years. Please let me know whether it's as bad as I think(or not) by commenting! Suggestions are more than welcome!
[bodytext] => Seemed to be a bright day at the start Annoyance filled within my heart Set out on an unimaginable quest Among queer people who I used to detest I was a knight in a shining armor Who made a bizzare blunder Did things which shouldn't have been done Armageddon had just begun Stuck in a boulevrad of broken dreams The situation makes my insides scream No shoulder to rest my head on No lap to cry on My heart is filled with frustration And maybe accumulation of exasperation This is more than I can endure But there is no cure [comments] => 3 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 32 [informant] => newplayer96 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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